 DarkSpiritDemon 10/16/11 . chapter 2Your not the only one! I find Stockholm syndrome fascinating to but thats just my inner psychologist getting excited! :P Great story by the way! |
 Blackgaz22 8/17/11 . chapter 8i liked it |
 BlackRose-FlowerofDeath 4/7/10 . chapter 8Very interesting...can't wait to see how this plays out!
BlackRose |
 no1longer2writing3 8/18/09 . chapter 8Oh that was gorgeous. I believe you just gave me the inspiration to practice piano again.
Thank you for that and sharing your story with us |
 ArmoredSoul 7/23/09 . chapter 8Perverted, crass, crude, sometimes cruel, but he's still got a heart in there. Beating or not. |
 mydirt09 6/18/09 . chapter 8In short: I loved it. In the long: Its nice to see another side of a BJ and Lyds story that doesn't need them ending up sleeping together..although I love those too. |
 JoeEngland 4/28/09 . chapter 8Sheesh, Lydia, let's not nominate the guy for sainthood just yet. He may be nicer than a giant worm that wants to eat you alive, but so are many bad husbands (even ones who blackmailed their wives into doing the deed). Well, she'll probably shake it off next time he forgets to change her water dish.
I wonder how she'll pass the time in that place, anyway? Being trapped in a Tim Burton style environment would likely inspire some pretty Kafka-esque musings before long. Maybe she'll take up writing.
I also wonder how her parents are doing... since time passes so much faster in the "Neitherworld," from their perspective it's probably been at least a few years since they lost Lydia. Yeesh... wonder what they did with her room?
Joking aside, this is a fun, sweet, creative story that I'd like to see continued sometime. Or at least brought to a conclusion. Too many fine stories around here are left undone.
Kind of like ghosts, I guess. |
 beth.e.bell 2/14/09 . chapter 7wow this is getting good _ |
 beth.e.bell 2/14/09 . chapter 2lol good joke! and i like it so far. |
 arkynox 10/5/08 . chapter 8up date up date Please ! this is just getting good. So much needs to happen more love more sarrow more more I don't know, in my mind I see them falling in love and her helping him get all his powers back but it comes as a price and she die's or is close to dieing or better yet is being holed of to heaven and Beej is freaking out and trying to hold on to her and shows off his cool ass powers in a mine blowing don't f with the b man way. |
 Buchi-18 8/4/08 . chapter 1Love it please update i need to read the next |
 Black-Beri 11/28/07 . chapter 8i love the unusual sweet ending, it isnt super mushy but much more realistic |
 bleebloop 11/23/07 . chapter 8i loved it! |
 Ed's Tomato 10/30/07 . chapter 8Oh this is wonderful. So often writers make Beej all snuggly and sweet from the getgo. I like how well you characterized him and Lyds too. Spot on. I eagerly await more! |
 SadPanda7 8/6/07 . chapter 8YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT HERE! PLEASE UPDATE! :p Because I LOVE it! |