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Spirits.Dawn
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
EK!OMG I LOVE THIS!ITS SOO...HOT!Thank you!(for the penis comment)XP
HAERTOFAVAMPYRE
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
supermarket hot sex! yes!
YukinoKara
2008-07-03 . chapter 1
haha, nice oneshot XD I noticed that after reading 50+ smutty fanfics (most of which are Sasunaru and Edvy), this is the first one which uses the word "penis" I think people don't like that word because it sounds ugly...or maybe they're just trying to save what's left of their innocence lol XD
well written XD
Sun-chan
2007-11-30 . chapter 1
So CUTE! I LOVED IT!

Your writing style is just...adorable! Just profesional enough not to get overly squishy and confusing and the perfect blend of smutt (and PENIS ;P ) and fluff and fun to keep it interesting and light and great and totally awesome. Now if only two gorgeous young lads would sneak off to a bathroom to have loud hott BOOTY smex in one of the laundrymats that I frequent...Ah the wonderful kink of a public place. I like your Envy...he's like an imp, mew!

You have a wonderful style, please write a sequal involving a supermarket and maybe, just a suggestion, Envy and an energy drink? Mew.

LOVED IT! PEACE!
QuitexSoul
2007-11-22 . chapter 1
i think goin to the supermarket is a prefect idea! ;) i cn just imgaine it now. hehehe
MelloxChocolate
2007-11-01 . chapter 1
I liked it, it was funny, and hot. I hope you write more with this pairing
Cheru-chan1316
2007-09-10 . chapter 1
I bow down to you! I worship you!

I want more!

It was toatlay the best!
shba
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
dude that was the most fuck up thing i've ever read
ChOpStIcKsXOXO
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Well... I don't know why I never reviewed this when I read it a few months ago... Prolly cuz I didnt have an account...*sweatdrops* Well... I really do love this pairing, Ed and Envy just seem to go together so perfectly. I really loved it.This fic is so cute but at the same time humorous and sexy. I was laughing so hard when I read it.
Also I dont know why people never say penis either. I guess it takes away poetic qualities in their writing or something...
nekoluver
2007-06-11 . chapter 1
lol BOOTY! This story... Wow... I should go to the laundromat more often. Cuz you never know.. XD So what DID you do with those boxers? ...And the sock? OMG WHAT DID YOU DO WITH THE SOCK?! XP
=^.^=
EdElricRules
2007-05-01 . chapter 1
I don't belvie im reviewing a story that is YOAI 0_0 you've contaminated my mind 0_0 cool story :D
Yeah write the supermarket one-shot that would be AWESOME!
Over and Out
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gggggg
2007-04-28 . chapter 1
Damn this story is funny. (and cute to) I've been meaning to comment this for awhile but every time that damn roflcopter picture distracts me. Stupid roflcopter...

Anyway for that I bestow upon you the best commercial ever.

-Mestilf
Chibi-Elric-Chan
2007-04-07 . chapter 1
this story was written really well and the word booty makes me laugh like every time I hear it lol!
Vegeta 07
2007-04-03 . chapter 1
Friggin Awesome! Gay Ed and Envy! Who would have thought of that!?!?!
Sasunaru-rikusora-akuroku
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
This story was so Kawaii!
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