 Spirits.Dawn 2009-02-12 . chapter 1EK!OMG I LOVE THIS!ITS SOO...HOT!Thank you!(for the penis comment)XP |
 HAERTOFAVAMPYRE 2009-01-19 . chapter 1supermarket hot sex! yes! |
 YukinoKara 2008-07-03 . chapter 1haha, nice oneshot XD I noticed that after reading 50+ smutty fanfics (most of which are Sasunaru and Edvy), this is the first one which uses the word "penis" I think people don't like that word because it sounds ugly...or maybe they're just trying to save what's left of their innocence lol XD
well written XD |
 Sun-chan 2007-11-30 . chapter 1 So CUTE! I LOVED IT!
Your writing style is just...adorable! Just profesional enough not to get overly squishy and confusing and the perfect blend of smutt (and PENIS ;P ) and fluff and fun to keep it interesting and light and great and totally awesome. Now if only two gorgeous young lads would sneak off to a bathroom to have loud hott BOOTY smex in one of the laundrymats that I frequent...Ah the wonderful kink of a public place. I like your Envy...he's like an imp, mew!
You have a wonderful style, please write a sequal involving a supermarket and maybe, just a suggestion, Envy and an energy drink? Mew.
LOVED IT! PEACE! |
 QuitexSoul 2007-11-22 . chapter 1i think goin to the supermarket is a prefect idea! ;) i cn just imgaine it now. hehehe |
 MelloxChocolate 2007-11-01 . chapter 1I liked it, it was funny, and hot. I hope you write more with this pairing |
 Cheru-chan1316 2007-09-10 . chapter 1I bow down to you! I worship you!
I want more!
It was toatlay the best! |
 shba 2007-08-15 . chapter 1 dude that was the most fuck up thing i've ever read |
 ChOpStIcKsXOXO 2007-07-28 . chapter 1Well... I don't know why I never reviewed this when I read it a few months ago... Prolly cuz I didnt have an account...*sweatdrops* Well... I really do love this pairing, Ed and Envy just seem to go together so perfectly. I really loved it.This fic is so cute but at the same time humorous and sexy. I was laughing so hard when I read it.
Also I dont know why people never say penis either. I guess it takes away poetic qualities in their writing or something... |
 nekoluver 2007-06-11 . chapter 1lol BOOTY! This story... Wow... I should go to the laundromat more often. Cuz you never know.. XD So what DID you do with those boxers? ...And the sock? OMG WHAT DID YOU DO WITH THE SOCK?! XP
=^.^= |
 EdElricRules 2007-05-01 . chapter 1I don't belvie im reviewing a story that is YOAI 0_0 you've contaminated my mind 0_0 cool story :D
Yeah write the supermarket one-shot that would be AWESOME!
Over and Out
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 gggggg 2007-04-28 . chapter 1Damn this story is funny. (and cute to) I've been meaning to comment this for awhile but every time that damn roflcopter picture distracts me. Stupid roflcopter...
Anyway for that I bestow upon you the best commercial ever.
-Mestilf |
 Chibi-Elric-Chan 2007-04-07 . chapter 1this story was written really well and the word booty makes me laugh like every time I hear it lol! |
 Vegeta 07 2007-04-03 . chapter 1Friggin Awesome! Gay Ed and Envy! Who would have thought of that!?!?! |
 Sasunaru-rikusora-akuroku 2007-02-08 . chapter 1This story was so Kawaii! |