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| Winga 2008-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseHaha! Nice that for once Hermione is the one not to know. Well, perhaps it is understandable with her always reading - she cannot notice everything! This was a good one, thanks for writing it! |
| Moonlight Memories 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseIt's Holmes, I'm quite sure.Wait.You tricked me out of a review! Lol. Nevermind. You had the skill. |
| sbkar 2006-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis sentence is a bit confusing: Ron had shurg and continue eatting his pie while drinking his pumpkin juice but Hermione watched as Harry winked at Malfoy and rush out of the Great Hall, Malfoy soon following. (You do realize Ron shrugged and continued eating and Harry rushed out.) Also, Sherlock Holmes might want his name to have the "L" back. A beta editor will help you with the missing "ed"s and other things. They can also help you flesh out plotlines. |
| Potter's Wifey 2006-10-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like it. |