OMG EXCEL SAGA! I love Excel Saga! Keep going PLEASE!

High marks for the concept. Also, genuinely funny. :D

I enjoyed the fact that it was a fanfic parodying other fanfics in the Excel section. *chortles* And the notes about ripped-off plots and authors' notes that shouldn't be inside the fic in parentheses... man, I nearly pissed myself laughing.

Funny!

Pretty good stuff, looking forward to the next part. Keep it up :D

Plot tastes almost as good as nougat, although it is more chewy. This nearly made me bust a stitch. Find a new authro to staple to the floor quickly or I will get pains from my stomach devouring itself.

HAHAH! XD This is great! Killed by a toilet seat? Oh my word, that's rich! Looking forward to more - and plot is optional (Excel Saga was devoid of a plot, after all. It was just one random piece of insanity after another!)

- Insanity Lord.

Ahahahahahaha!

That's classic! I hope you don't mind if I post it on my Anime-Club's website...because the staple (no pun intended) of our well-balanced anime diet is EXCEL SAGA! We actually have a life-sized(ish) cardboard cut out of Il Palazzo in the corner of the room.

Anyways I'll stop rambling and go look up more ways to say "AMAZING!" and save them for next chapter's review.

Oh. My. God. That is all I say. MAN THIS ROCKS. Cannot wait for the next.

I enjoyed it. It's a wonder why no one reviewed. o.o

I think you have a character or two of of character but it fit so well with this story.

Heh heh, it's funny. You should write more. ^_^