i absolutely loved it. i finished reading one of your other stories, and then went to your profile and saw this story. i have to say- it's incredible. i also really liked how you threw some middle ages vocabulary in there. im taking highlights of west civ. in school now, and when i saw the words "Fief" and "Estate" i was like lmfao i know what those wordsd mean! haha. but yeah, awesome story.

Finally! After all these years[haha]!
I finally got to finish it!!
It was amazing; and be prepared to see my screen name pop up in the near future- I'll definatley be reading more of your stories!

Ok, I love your stories. I read a couple of them a few years back; but I didnt get to finish this one- it's as good as I remeber. =]
You'll definatley be published one day, hopefully i'll be so lucky as well, ;D

Story=10/10


Somehow, I keep forgetting to leave a review for this story.
I wanted to take the time to tell you how much your writing is appreciated, because it's almost impossible to find someone with writing capabilities such as yours on this site. I was interested in this story the entire time, not a single dull moment.
Your characters, even though borrowed, have their own three dimensional personalities, and I think you displayed that excellently. The drama/suspense was fantastic, and it all played out rather well. It didn't seem rushed, cliche, or hurried in the least. The romance was nicely done, heart wrenching, and beautiful to say the least. You added just enough of all genres, making it eclectic and tasteful. I enjoyed the entire experience your story brought, and I hope to see more of you in the future.

folding his arms?
in the end of this chapter it says 'folding his arms, the king...'


...but in this story he has only one arm?


o_o

Oh, i am SO glad you brought Tessaiga into it! :3 Yay. Total thumbs up!

I loved this story just as much as ur others. they should be made into movies!(which i'm pretty sure i said before lol) ur an AWESOME writer! another for the favs list!!

YAY!

DAMMIT NARAKU RUINED EVERYTHING!

aw so sweet...HAHAHA GOOD FOR YOU NARAKU...geez Naraku must be an idiot if he didnt see that coming...pretty smart of kagome for taking the shikon no tama with her!!

This chapter was so sweet :) yay

this chapter is so sad!! POOR INUYASHA AND KAGOME! DAMN YOU NARAKU! i like the part when kagome slapped naraku lol!

i loved this chapter kinda sad though...makes me wanna cry :(
I HATE U NARAKU!

i think that Onigumo's "untimely death" was really caused by Naraku so he could inherit his position as the lord...or maybe they were related according to the spider shaped burn on Onigumo's back from when he died

this chapter was so sad...I HATE NARAKU/ONIGUMO!! (not even gonna call him a "lord" cuz he isnt worth it!!)