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| Sculder the Goblin Queen 2008-07-01 ch 15, | abuseSo pretty much in my mind there is only one good reason to make a story M rated. And that is if they have sex. Now I love the story... But the lack of smut is saddening to me. :( So epilgue? With smut? Please? I would love you forever and ever! :) |
| akuma-chan0326 2008-06-17 ch 15, | abuseaww, thats so cute. and artemis is still artemis, even from the books. very good story by the way, i just wish that there was more stories like this. |
| Gedpod 2008-06-03 ch 5, | abuseinteresting, wonder where this will go. |
| Barricade 2008-05-27 ch 15, | abuseI dunno, I kinda think you did a bit of a letdown for how it ended. Just...something missing. I dunno what, just, something missing. I -did- however love that you showed off what happened to Underhill AND gave a few hints as to what the the Soultaker/Kristine was up just before SEELE 'Jr' showed up. The idea for Holly and Artemis - I dunno if I can say I ship for anyone Artemis knows, so I'm gonna shrug and say I like your solution. I know Minerva is out as either the timeskip didn't occur, or she was killed when 2nd Impact occurred, so that avenue was a deadend in this story. Now as for another question - Where the heck have you been bud? Work usually isn't -that- much of a hell for you not to write. You okay? |
| Marcos Edson 2008-05-24 ch 15, | abuseAw, nice and funny ending! ^_^ Also, it's always interesting to see characters we met in previous but set in the future stories. :) ps - welcome back, it has been a long absence... I guess RL's been hitting hard, I know it has been hitting me... |
| alatnet 2008-05-24 ch 15, | abuseroflmfao, nice ending! You are definitely one of the best author i have ever seen. |
| Marcos Edson 2008-02-24 ch 14, | abuseWelcome back! We were about to send a search party... :D On a serious note, I hope everything is fine... Good episode, somehow I don't think those bombs are going to work, at least not where Underhill wanted them... |
| Barricade 2008-02-23 ch 14, | abuseI was beginning to wonder if I was going to need to drag out a Phoenix Down for you or something. If it makes you feel any better, I've been through a hell of a mess myself - NEVER take 20 credits a quarter when its all for a Digital Illustration degree. 3 hours sleep average, and more homework then you really want to think about. So I know how it feels to be overloaded. Back to the review - getting back onto the horse more then anything this chapter as it came across a little rough. Shorter then normal, but again, thats more you getting back into the groove. Nice to see that Underhill actually seems to have followed the Overlord list and also fell victim to it (Get competent minions to set things, and then ended up leaving for a confrontation and leaving the incompetent minion behind). And I was wondering when someone was going to mention Holly getting swept off her feet. |
| Marcos Edson 2008-01-06 ch 13, | abuseHappy (belated) New Year! ROFL... Poor Mana, what she has to stand to help a friend... :D |
| Zero Asakura 2008-01-01 ch 13, | abuseHiya! so long! i wish you the best for the 2008 year! well, i'm glad to see Mana was doing well, sort of *lol* well then, ja'ne! |
| capt. n 2007-12-01 ch 12, | abuseAcording to your timeline in the story, this takes place after NG:GR, meaning that Shinji, Asuka, Rei, and Toji are now the Gaurdians, are they gowing to be makeing an apperance with these new powers? Thats about the only thing that I can see wrong, other then that, I am loving this story. I keep reading your other stories because their so dang good. Please keep writing, I hope to see the end of this one. |
| Marcos Edson 2007-11-24 ch 12, | abuseEh, eh, nice, a repressed memory with attitude, I like that... ^_^ Maya and Ritsuko... ROFL! Keep it coming! :) |
| Zero Asakura 2007-11-18 ch 12, | abusehello quite some time did pass well, the update was more than good enough. i'd review more but i got another story to read, then work, then writing, then more work i like all of these task i have to do but each will require a determined amount of time really thank you for the update wish you the best Zero Asakura - Forever Love and Fun, until the Morning Sun P.S: Mist Hero told me about a mailing list or something like that can i be in? |
| Marcos Edson 2007-10-12 ch 11, | abuseROFL! Eh, eh, 42... LOL! Nice reference and a good chapter overall. :) |
| brolly501 2007-09-05 ch 10, | abusesemi interesting |