I like it!

Great fic! Especially the interaction between Kate and Dean - very interesting. People usually make Kate a very one dimensional character - bad and crazy, and not much else. You brought out a very, shall I say, human side to her. There's more to Kate than meets the eye. I would love to see a sequel.

This was really good! I liked it a lot! A sequel would be very nice!

beautiful, just beautiful.

you need to do a sequel that was great... I loved it

Yikes, my show's almost starting! But I loved this, though the Sammy torture sequences made me laugh because I know you were drooling as your wrote them. Is your keyboard okay?

:D

Really good, I loved the Dean action sequence (though his language is a little harsher than I'm used to...)

But I love the snarky attitude exchange between Dean and Kate.

My favorite line of the fic so far: -> "“Oh,” he said in response to Kate’s rant. “Those rotten werewolves!” He shook his fist."

O! I'm excited! But...Cain and Abel? And Adam and Dante? The English major in me is giggling...

O! Of Werewolves and Vampires! I like!

I think you've got a great grasp of the boys, both of them. I can easily picture Dean saying all of what he said throughout the fic. Nice description of Sam's pain at the vision--and nice Wincest bit. *snicker*

Can't wait for next chapter!

I thought this was a terrific story and I really enjoyed reading it. It contained my favorite elements: Sam, werewolves and vampires.

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AND I LOVED YOUR STORYS THEY ARE SO FULL OF DETAIL, AND WHEN SAM HAD HIS VSION, I FELT ACTUALLY THERE, i don't know what u did, but it made the vision even better and beleivable not like any other fan fic so far, and this is your first, wow, its amazing for the first 1, wow, your and expert at detail, and im a sammy girl too, loved the torture, heheh like a fetish really, and the guns on dean-wiowowowowowowowowo
but its all sam for me, heeheh and i loved it, please write a sequel for us, i mean i loved it so much and aud love more to come, wowow i love u and ur stories!1
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Interesting ending! Not bad for your first time out. You had lots of plots to work with, so that was a challenge off the bat. I like that Kate and Dean couldn't figure out why they really worked together through it all. And what about the baddie? I assume we'll see more of him.

Nice work!

:D
Caroline

that was really good. i hope you make a sequel

Just read your story and it was very good. I would love it if you would do a sequel, but only if Sam and Dean live at the end. I don't read stories where Sam and/or Dean die.

Please let me know what you decide - I'm at Valerie_Whincup@hc-sc.gc.ca

Thanks and keep up the good writing.

Enjoying this story - I liked the way you let Garmr get all cocky and "I'm the ubermeister" before having Kate and Hel slice and dice because he underestimated them(they'd have killed him too if they hadn't made the mistake of reminding him of their deal). That's good because sometimes "demon story" writers confuse power with intellect - a tornado is powerful, but it'll never do your Math homework. Looking forward to more.