it was really good.


and what's this about a plot bunny and ** rape?

This fic wasn't crappy...infact it was quite great. I love that you gave Nanao a back story. Keep writing bleach.

Just wanted to let you know that this was nice, and I liked it, even after I randomly found it, lol.

Good stuff, man.

Nice comments at teh end :P

~Conterra-san

I thought this was pretty darn good. I liked your characterisation and you seemed to have a really nice handle on the world. I think this is quiet a believable backstory for Nanao. Yes, that was really enjoyable.

hi! wow! I hope more nanao-shun plot bunnies attack you!

I found this to be very interesting. The idea of Nanao-chan looking out for her boss before he was her boss is very cool.

And the fact that she looks out for him is believable, if you go by that one ending at the end of one of the episodes - you know... where they recap the captain/vice-captain relationships and show them doing cool moves and stuff...

nanao-chan sees her boss drunk at a bar and obviously makes the decision to take him home.

yeah... i really liked this. and as for shunsei's attitude toward women... it might be considered sexist in the sense that he's always treating nanao like glass and trying to protect her all the time. but on the other hand, i think it's kinda sweet - because he's chivalrous and obviously being one of the OLDER shinigami, acting old-fashioned, in a sense.

hahah! hope you write more!
ja ne!

p.s. sorry for the rant. but i just love this pairing!

good one! very thoughtful and in-character. lemme guess bout the job... geisha?

Good to see more ShunsuiNanao fic on this server. God knows we could use more of it.

A few minor errors in your story... There werre some tense problems such a using present tense words in a past tense point of view.

Also, this story could have been developed much more. I like the idea of his pink cloak being her kimono. It's an idea that I myself would like to work on some in the future maybe. Of course who knows when 'the future' will be. Rest assured I won't steal your idea. I'm not a fic thief.

Anyway, keep it up. The best way to improve is to keep practicing.

awesome fic, i loved it!

That was really good! There aren't many thoughtful ideas on where Nanao-chan came from, but I really like this one ^_^ Keep up the good work!

Aww, this was cute and very in character. I heart this fic. Don't worry about plot bunnies, I have my fair share of them..namely my current obsession with Kenpachi/Nanao together. Don't ask where that pairing came from I just know that I love the thought of them together >XD