Wow. I loved the comic book parts, and Watchmen has this "for the greater good" thing. V is good too. This seems really reaL.

this first chapter is amazing. Their way of spreaking is appropriate but a little too formal at time, which is expected from old british people!
so he is a she?! that astonished me! I am more than curious to know what will soon follow

interesting! i really like how the story's written! please please update soon!

Umm... Are you serious? L being a girl, I mean.

Oh, this dreadfully good, please, do update! it is a most..interesting way to prtray L, as a female no less, very well written as well. If you should ever come across the need of a beta? Maybe i could be of use, or just bouncing off ideas? I have somewhat of a good idea what words are proper which are not and so on.

sugestion: L sometimes has the uncanny habit of inserting transitions into his [in your case her/L] vocabulary and finding a way to use her wit to humiliate people or annoy them by letting them know she already knew any information...she also hates having her sentences cut off.

And her style of fighting: Capoeira?

very delightful!

-Madeline Cullen

plz update soon!

Omigawh. Wonderful story. I absolutely adore how you went against the whole Death Note sexist thing. xD "All the women are inferior to the men." Well guess what, L's a girl. IN YOUR FACE.

Eh'erm.

Well, what really attracted my attention was your title. "Athena's Prodigy." I couldn't help but just double click because Athena's my NAME. xD

But yeah. Watari wa' and Watashi wa'. Nicely done.

- .raiin

I just found this today and I've already read all of it. You're a very good writer. The story is awesome, I love it! Update please.

This is quite intriguing - I really like where you've gone with it thus far. Bravo.

I really enjoyed your story, but is there more? I'd love to read the rest of it.

Update! I love this story, and I love the greek diety and myth usage.

quite nice story, good written, nice content... but i can't read any chapter of it any more... it is SUCH a pity you made l a girl, i can't take it, really dislike this fact! :P

This is a really good story! I love how you made L's personality. Please continue!

I do not often read fanfiction because I am rarely impressed with the quaility of the writing. Your work is an exception. I have read it several times, and I'm sure I will continue reading it. I think you really captured the personality of L and of Watari. Good luck with your other stories.

Ack! Is this all...?

I really did enjoy reading this. The evolution of L's entrance into the detective sphere is playing out wonderfully; she's also a very believable precursor to the canonical L we all know and love. The beginning part where she comments on the bedroom being an "ironic place to die" was made of pure win. But...but...only eight chapters...*sigh* I really would love to read more. ;P

Great writing, though. Keep it up!

~Fly