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bemyhero
2006-11-22 . chapter 11
Ack! Liang is so creepy!! And poor Sho...I love how you have created some characters to replace old ones. History repeating itself almost...:D I love it. Update soon!
bemyhero
2006-11-20 . chapter 10
This is great! more! more! I love it...
LoveroftheFlame
2006-11-20 . chapter 10
“ Take care of him… and watch over him. Protect him and keep him safe…”

Aw... Zuko. He loves his son so much.

Nice update.
Zombie
2006-11-20 . chapter 10
Aww... thats sad. But good at the same time!Update!
Dragon Jadefire
2006-11-18 . chapter 9
So sad.
Zombie
2006-11-17 . chapter 9
*rembling lip* Thats so sad!But sutch a good chapter!But sad!!Poor Katara and Zuko,their little soldier boy off to war. Update soon!
Zombie
2006-11-13 . chapter 8
Aw!So sad! Like father, like son, I soppose. How will Katara react? Hrm... Update soon!
Dragon Jadefire
2006-11-13 . chapter 8
Katara should come in and see Zuko burning everything with tears of grief, rage and fear.

And I bet the old dude is Zhao. Wait! He's dead! or is he?
Zombie
2006-11-11 . chapter 7
Wow... I had the stranget de ja vu sence I read this chapter. Seriousley! I was tearing my hair out saying to myself,"I think I've already read this!" and then when the kids started fighting I was certain I have! Am I going insane, her, more insane? Either way, this chapter was worth reading twice, so I still give its rightly earned props. Update soon!
Dragon Jadefire
2006-10-27 . chapter 6
Update! And don't let Iroh die!
Dragon Jadefire
2006-10-26 . chapter 5
Long Feng could be a eunuch! Cool...
Zombie
2006-10-25 . chapter 5
Wow, kinda important thing to not tell someone, eh? Sheesh. Good chapter! Update soon!
LoveroftheFlame
2006-10-24 . chapter 2
Very nice job! Please continue...
Zombie
2006-10-24 . chapter 4
So it was your plan to disturb us? Awesum!! Very nice! Very nice! When Zhang said that "Eunuch status" I thought it meant the /other/ meaning at first.PoTC still was fresh in my mind. Wonder what was on the school Aang read.. update so I can find out!
Zombie
2006-10-23 . chapter 3
Little uneasy at the 5 second long bi part, other than that, I loved this chapter a lot. Poor Aang, at least he still has Momo, and Toph too I guess. He should at least be proud of his amazing 'looks defying age' ability.
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