 bemyhero 2006-11-22 . chapter 11Ack! Liang is so creepy!! And poor Sho...I love how you have created some characters to replace old ones. History repeating itself almost...:D I love it. Update soon! |
 bemyhero 2006-11-20 . chapter 10This is great! more! more! I love it... |
 LoveroftheFlame 2006-11-20 . chapter 10“ Take care of him… and watch over him. Protect him and keep him safe…”
Aw... Zuko. He loves his son so much.
Nice update. |
 Zombie 2006-11-20 . chapter 10 Aww... thats sad. But good at the same time!Update! |
 Dragon Jadefire 2006-11-18 . chapter 9So sad. |
 Zombie 2006-11-17 . chapter 9 *rembling lip* Thats so sad!But sutch a good chapter!But sad!!Poor Katara and Zuko,their little soldier boy off to war. Update soon! |
 Zombie 2006-11-13 . chapter 8 Aw!So sad! Like father, like son, I soppose. How will Katara react? Hrm... Update soon! |
 Dragon Jadefire 2006-11-13 . chapter 8Katara should come in and see Zuko burning everything with tears of grief, rage and fear.
And I bet the old dude is Zhao. Wait! He's dead! or is he? |
 Zombie 2006-11-11 . chapter 7 Wow... I had the stranget de ja vu sence I read this chapter. Seriousley! I was tearing my hair out saying to myself,"I think I've already read this!" and then when the kids started fighting I was certain I have! Am I going insane, her, more insane? Either way, this chapter was worth reading twice, so I still give its rightly earned props. Update soon! |
 Dragon Jadefire 2006-10-27 . chapter 6Update! And don't let Iroh die! |
 Dragon Jadefire 2006-10-26 . chapter 5Long Feng could be a eunuch! Cool... |
 Zombie 2006-10-25 . chapter 5 Wow, kinda important thing to not tell someone, eh? Sheesh. Good chapter! Update soon! |
 LoveroftheFlame 2006-10-24 . chapter 2Very nice job! Please continue... |
 Zombie 2006-10-24 . chapter 4 So it was your plan to disturb us? Awesum!! Very nice! Very nice! When Zhang said that "Eunuch status" I thought it meant the /other/ meaning at first.PoTC still was fresh in my mind. Wonder what was on the school Aang read.. update so I can find out! |
 Zombie 2006-10-23 . chapter 3 Little uneasy at the 5 second long bi part, other than that, I loved this chapter a lot. Poor Aang, at least he still has Momo, and Toph too I guess. He should at least be proud of his amazing 'looks defying age' ability. |