Ha ha, I could so see this happening. Great characterization. It was humorous, more so than you may have been aiming for. But to see Sai mentally challenge Sasuke like that. With the whole "bring it on" attitude. I had to laugh.

Anyway, thanks for the great read, definitely a favorite. You rock. :)

please...tell me there's a sequal to this! this is awsome!!

*love* it. its so good. so...so...GOOD.

*wide grin* you made a sainaru with no sasuke bashing! first one i've found! *high five for you*

lol nice. to bad it's a oneshot.

Aw...! I just finished reading 'Like a Brother' and now, after reading this--I feel like they're being idiots. They're dancing around each other. Oh well, happens in real life, too.

Thanks for this.

ooh I like it ^.^ sounds like a good first chapter to a fun naruxsai fic ;]

It's a shame that you never continued this. Decent NaruSai stories come in surprisingly short supply, and your's has quite a bit of potential. :) You made a few mistakes in punctionation, like in the last line for example, but other than that thre was nothing that took away from the story. And Sai taking on Sasuke! XD I love that idea! I'd love to see those to go head to head for Naruto's affection...particularly if Sai is out for the uke role, since I second you on that opinion. Sai is easier to see taking it than giving it in bed. >.> That might be one reason why his ** obsession comes off as adorable.

BUT ANYWAY! Good story, wish there was more, but understand if there isn't going to be. NaruSai forever!

oh man! hahha, loved this one too. you rock!

WOOTNESS! SO SAI! YOU KICK THAT UCHIHA'S **! WOHO! *waves around a 'go sai' flag*