Intriguing bit of work you have here to say the least, my friend; VERY interesting indeed…

Your writing style needs a bit of work, of course- some of the sentences just don’t seem to be broken up in quite the right places, and they sometimes don’t flow as well as they should- but your characterisation very effectively captures the personalities of the characters (Although I can really only say that with certainty about the Doctor Who cast, from what I’ve seen of the other shows you use here you manage that very nicely for the other characters as well). Sarah’s conversations with Robbie Ray were particularly interesting look at how the families of the Doctor’s companions cope with the knowledge that their loved ones are travelling through time and space to all kinds of unknown locations, while Captain Jack’s casual flirting with both Phil AND Pim perfectly reflected all the aspects of that character that make him so popular.

Plus, of course, the various locations you had the Doctor take Miley and Lily to were VERY interesting. The trip to the Crystal Spires was a particularly interesting example of a Doctor-level crisis- combined with a very... interesting... location for a Hannah Montana concert for her and Lily to ‘celebrate’ the beginning of their travels with the Doctor-, and their trip to the Gettysburg Address made for a very interesting example of a ‘historical’ adventure for the TARDIS crew (Particularly Lincoln’s reaction to learning the truth about Lily and Miley; that was a VERY effective scene you had there when Lincoln commented on how their friendship gave him hope that America would come through the current war)

And as for the bit with the Starsingers...

DAMN, that was an interesting idea; I can DEFINITELY see the Doctor encountering something like that at some point in his travels.

However, it’s your use of Davros that really wins you points. You perfectly capture everything about Davros that makes him such a ruthless villain, ranging from his belief that the Dalek philosophy is a ‘good’ one to his simple contempt of the Doctor’s philosophy, demonstrating precisely WHY the Doctor and he make such perfect adversaries.

After all, as evil as the Daleks are, they were programmed that way; Davros developed his philosophy on his own, knowing both good and evil, and yet chose to program the Daleks- his great legacy to the universe- to know nothing but evil and destruction.

If that doesn’t make him evil, I don’t know what DOES, quite frankly.

And as for this last chapter... with the discovery that the Doctor, Miley and Lily will face Davros and Batterson one last time...

DAMN, that’s going to be cool (Just so long as Miley doesn’t try and kill Davros or anything like that; it might not make her as bad as Davros- Davros would kill because he feels like it, whereas Miley would only kill if REALLY pushed to it-, but it certainly wouldn’t leave her the same person)!

Hope you’re just suffering from writer’s block; can’t wait for more!

(If you’re having trouble reconciling Davros’s presence in this story with his role in the fourth season finale, I have a theory that might account for that particular conundrum; just send me a PM if you’re interested)

Great story!I would have never been able to do all those crossovers and keep them all would get confusing really you managed to pull it off,and everybody's in character no 's just one quote my favorite video game,"The ending has not yet been written."Please update.

TARDISgirl

this is really really GOOD! I love story!

WOW! That was long! THAT WAS SO AWESOME! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

so the next Chapter is the last? ore is it more? I love this story. It is so good. Like a Doctor who season. I like this, it would be a grate episod, o would all you other chapters. Update soon I want to know what hapend next. I hope that the next chapter isnt the last but It looks like it. Update soon ok.

I love this story! Did you hear Rose is coming back in 2008? Oh, and I loved the relatonship between Jackson and Billie, do you mind if I write a one-shot on it? Great story!

Once in a while you come across a story that is perfect, a this the one. very very good story

I believe that the last chaptir was the last chapter. But I was wrong. Grate chapter. I like that part about the Sixth doctor was fun but why was Miley and Lily surprised about knowing that the doctor was a dad. they know he had a grandchild. as the doctor said in chapter 6 "900 years one would assume I had some sort of family". and you shoud keep yourselves updated. since October 2 it has been official that the Sontarans are going to be the lead villains in series 4. thats all I have to say. if I come up with somthing more you here from me. Update soon ok.

ok NO jonis brothers ...awesome chapter!

i LOVE your story are you going to continue? its really awesome!

This story is absoloutly brilliant! please please please update soon! Why this story doesnt have more reviews is beyond me. please keep up the excellent writing

Alleta

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Great Story, maybe you could write an adventure about where miley goes back in time and trys to save her mom. Like the in new series of Doctor Who where The Doctor takes Rose back in time and she trys to save her father.

I know it was Davros. He was the onely one the fit the description so is it going to be more or is this the end? if this in not the ned then update soon. se you later.

Wow, amazing story. One of the best I've ever read, and I mean it. It's so complex, but not to the point where it's confusing.

I havent seen eny of the old "Doctor who" shows But after Googeled the clues of who "The director" is. I will not tel who I think it is now but i have my suspicions.

You got "Suite Life" in now two? this will be fun.