|Reviews for A Murder in Norfolk|
| Silent Me 10/19/06 . chapter 3
| Mris 10/19/06 . chapter 3
It's a really good story so far, but I have one tiny little problem.
How does Xander, Willow and Buffy be at two places at once. Chapter 2, we see Xander being interrogated, and Buffy and Willow coming in with Major Finn? Then Chapter 3, we see them at the school...in Cleveland which is quite a ways from Washington D.C.
| The Sithspawn 10/19/06 . chapter 2
Great beginnig for this story:) I like how you portary the charcters though there is only one thing, you have a tendency to over use curse words.
The continuous repition of the F word in chapter one was very offputting for me. Sure military officers are known to curse all the time but it didn't seem appropriate the way you did it.
Otherwise, I'm waiting expectantly to see what you do next:):):)
| Wild320 10/18/06 . chapter 2
Keep it coming!
| B Oots 10/17/06 . chapter 2
This is a very good start to the story. Please update soon, so I can read, what demon was Lilly chasing and killed her?
| Mediancat 10/17/06 . chapter 2
So far I'm really liking this story - you've got the characterizations nailed all the way around.
| Silent Me 10/17/06 . chapter 2
I love the story! Update soon!
| I'mcalledZorro 10/16/06 . chapter 1
Great story so far. Totally LOVE NCIS!
| KaeKaeD 10/16/06 . chapter 1
This story is not PG-13. AFAIK, the F-word would automatically give it a R Rating.
| Wild320 10/16/06 . chapter 1
I liked to see more of this. I love Buffy and NCIS. Update soon.