Very sweet

Your angst always hits the spot. This one is very nice. XD

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Wow, that was gorgeous! And evocative. And I can't possibly be more descriptive because my brain has been short circuited by the awesome!

Oh, but poor Renji. Even if they became canon, I don't think he'd ever really *have* her. Oh, the angst!

Oh dear. You should have heard me make the longest 'aw' sound in history.

Renji is a bit of doofus but he's a lovely lovely man. RenjiRukia I love.

aww!, alil creepy twrdz the end, but aww!

Aww, how dare you make me cry! Haha, I love Renji x Rukia and this fiction is one of the best I've read. Short and sweet, just how I like it...with a little twist and a bit of angst!

Oi! At first I thought it was such a sweet Renji-Rukia fic, but then you have to add that one line at the end that makes my heart hurt!

Short and sweet and poignant - well done. Write more Rukia-Renji (or Rukia-Ichigo... or better yet, Rukia-Renji-Ichigo! ^_^)

This is beautiful!! Renji and Rukia SO belong together!! Keep writing and I'll add you to my favorites list!!
-Sabaku No Izumi

oh no poor renji it makes me want to cry i love him so

Oh. OH. *purrs*

That was undoubtedly the best fanfic I've had the pleasure of reading in quite some time, and probably my second favorite Renji fic. (he's my favorite) Your language, the seamless blending of fantasy and reality, the imagery, the grammar, (thank god... it's a precious, precious thing, good grammar.)the whole idea behind the fic- simply exquisite. Renji is completely in charecter, and angsty without shoving it in your face. *toes aside own Renji angst fics* I loved the metaphor in the second to laugh paragraph! Or whatever you might choose to call it. XD

Bleach sure inspires a lot of drabbles, but you are definitely one of the best. ^^ I checked your profile and read through a couple of your Naruto fics, but I'm sure hoping for some more Bleach! On author alert and fic favs you go! ^^

Liked it a a lot :D When i started reading it seemed like an ordinary short drabble to me, but the end surprised me and made me like your story :D