yay! she's going to say it! but question though..wouldn't it be funny if he says it first?.

ohh, that was well written, and explains well, you know you wrote a whole fic surrpunding the fact thet aelita is in front of jeremie's door,
awesome!

I enjoyed this. All the characterisations matched those in my head.

Very well done. I spotted no errors except one even the best make occasionally: a misspelled "who's". Very very well done, and the ifc itself is magnificent. Well done.

Cute JxA fic. :3 It was so, I dunno, cuddly. If that doesn't sound completely sappy. xD

i know its a one shot but you should really really consider putting up more chapters what do you think? not bad though a rating from 1-10 a 200 of course

Great story! This was very good! God bless!

:3 I love it!
If your going to continue I consider you doing it. STRONGLY. :3

Great job. It was cool how you left it at that, honestly. I really liked this.

God, that was just so adorable it almost hurt when i read it, exellent work!

that was actually very funny.

So this was one of those Angsty/Romance J/A shots you were talking 'bout on DH eh? Sweet.

This wins a spot on my fave's list.

constructive critism right? well , ok . It was good , not anything disrespcting the fundaments of Code Lyoko (Aelita would never think of Jeremie in other way than love , William go to hell , Herb is crazy , Jeremie too would never think of Aelita in other way than love , Yumi loves Ulrich but she tries to lie acting as she was "playing" with him and AelitaOdd NEVER (i have nothing against him then , well , you could do a longer next time .

Okay. WHAT IS IT WITH ME AND WANTING TO GET INTO DIFFERENT FANDOMS BECAUSE I READ FANFICTION FOR THEM?

Sorry for the outburst. But I'm serious. First I read these two WICKED Naruto one-shots by Welcome2Paradise and feel ticked that I don't have time to add that cartoon to my current watch list. Now I read this brilliant little piece of yours and suddenly feel compelled to watch Code Lyoko. (Of course, I've always thought it was a cool concept before now, but I never really WANTED to watch it... see what I mean?
Gah. You are brilliant, and my head hurts. XD

Very nice I think you should continue this oneshot! It could go even further from here, this could be a good story!-lyokofan30-