I like how you wrote this, in Hina's POV. There are not many Hina fics I've read, but it's safe to say that this is one of the bests. Job well done!

loved how you portrayed hina's pov with her children
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really loved it
-paw

I really enjoyed this. Not many people write about Hiei and Yukina's father, so it was very unique in the sense of story line. I liked how you ended with the crying of the hiruisekis. Please write more stories soon.

just perfect

I always wanted to read/write about 'him', the father of Hiei and Yukina...

and I think you did it so well... so perfectly! I really believe it could have happened this way.

thanks for such great story.

Wow! What a glimps at what we had never seen before! This is really good!