 Umegat 2009-01-16 . chapter 12I didn't notice when I started this that is wasn't marked "complete". Are you planning on not finishing it since it's been nearly 2 years since an update was posted? It seems that it could actually end with chapter 12 since Bobby is pulling through, though more would always be great. It is so hard to find any LOCI stories that are not B/A ships, let alone *good* ones that are not.
Re the story itself: loved it, as I do most of your stories (haven't yet read them all so has to be "most", lol). It won't get me to watch House though, as your 'Another World' got me obsessed with LOCI through the Torchwood connection. Your characterization of House seems to be spot-on from the little I remember of him, and reminded forcibly of why I loathe him. For which reason I *love* that Alex so thoroughly intimidated him. Mike shouldn't have stopped her from throttling him. |
 Belladonna16 2008-11-08 . chapter 12Update, update, update, update, update, update, PLEASE PLEASE update! :D |
 Tracey Claybon 2008-08-28 . chapter 12Please - *please* - finish this one! I normally don't watch House, but you got my attention with this one! |
 sky m 2008-02-29 . chapter 12this is a great story, I like your Bobby and Alex and you've captured House very good too... it says tbc... can we hope for more? |
 spookycc 2007-07-17 . chapter 3Wow, I am totally impressed. You channel Goren AND House equally well. House's sarcasm came shining through here! Well writ! ~~spookycc |
 caseyswife 2007-03-21 . chapter 12I am so glad that Bobby is finally getting the message and that House is smart enough to know that he needs to stay put to get completely healed. Interesting the juxtaposition of Bobby's injury and House's own handicap - I am sure that House will try and find a way to get Bobby back walking without a cane and caliper - especially after hearing how he came to be injured. Love the interaction between the doctors and the detectives and LOVED Alex's good natured 'beating' to get Bobby to pay attention. You have such a wonderful grasp of these characters and how they approach each obstacle and each other. Thanks for sharing your great work! |
 InfinityStar 2007-03-15 . chapter 12It's good to see him finally awake...and amazing that House is still interested in him. Would that be because of his enigmatic personality or because he can relate to his crippling leg injury and the ever-present pain that accompanies it? Could he be wondering how Bobby copes without having developed an addiction to vicodin? Hm... |
 TrinityWildcat 2007-02-28 . chapter 12Another good chapter. I will be interested to see if this ends soon, or if there's another twist coming up. And does Bobby remember the ice bath incident? *shiver* |
 gorencrazy 2007-02-28 . chapter 12thanks blu, thanks a lot, for the wonderful update. something must be wrong with me though, 'cos i just don't seem to get enough...and i selfishly keep asking for more...you do a wonderful job with Bobby...you and infinitystar make my days, and i'm loving bammi's counterplay a lot too. see a pattern here ;) ? |
 Marion the Geek 2007-02-27 . chapter 12I love this story. More soon please. |
 deliriousdancer 2007-02-27 . chapter 12Thank you for updating. This has been a very intense story and until it is finished I will not relax. You always manage to throw me just when I think I have it figured out or everything will be ok so I can relax. Alex sure knows our boy, confronting him with doing the lecture just to prove House wrong. Either way though, he would have fallen ill. I really like the way you write Mike. You and InfinityStar really have captured the bond between them and write Mike and Bobby like true friends. |
 bammi1 2007-02-26 . chapter 12Okay, nice to know that they like the people of New Jersey, if not the state itself. As a former Jerseyite, whose family still lives there, I appreciate that!! I LOVE New Jersey! (Wildwood, N.J.-best beach in the world!)
You're probably going to have to add a few more days to Bobby's hospital stay the way Alex is slapping him around! Sometimes though, he deserves it. LOL
Wouldn't it be great if House COULD fix Bobby's leg?
Enjoyed the chapter very much. |
 Scripted Starlet 2007-02-26 . chapter 12I was so happy to see an update on this. The marvelous, angsty crossover that wins me over. Have I mentioned how much I enjoy the way you write Mike? He's very likable. |
 GraciePie 2007-02-26 . chapter 12Wonderful he is doing better :) |
 Angelfirenze 2007-02-26 . chapter 12Mikey likes Cammy? I'm a little afraid. Is it wrong to be glad Bobby's stuck there for another two weeks with Alex and, for a week, Mikey? Yes, I always call him Mikey. I think you know that. Anyway, the longer he stays there, the better chances we have of Bobby personally going to hunt our dear Dr. House down, himself. I can't wait. UPDATE as soon as you can, please? |