Oh I was so happy to find the fan fiction. I spent the last few days (busy) reading this. Always happy to find a long fiction I can get into. And can't wait for the update.

Only thing I kind did not get at first if this was a crossover from the X-Men comic and the X-Men evolution. ( Kitty is a valley girl, and Rogue was called Goth. ) Other than that great work. *Saved on Story Alert*

Heya. Liking the story so far. It's really rather heart warming :) I'm all for warm fuzzies.
I have, however, a suggestion for you. In French, there's masculine and feminine endings on adjectives. In the case of petit/petite, petit is masculine, petite is feminine. I hope this helps.

Enjoyed the chapter. Please continue and update again soon.

Chapter 11 was great! It's amazing how you still keep to everyone's characters, how you make them stay so real, and don't abandon that for the sake of the storyline. Rather, it's because of your storyline that the characters are so real. Thanks!

hope the inspiration keeps coming, no pressure though =)

Enjoyed the story, please continue. Looking forward to reading more so please update soon.

That was an exciting chapter! Although I am still championing for a remy and rogue ending I love this story especially the descirption of Logan being a dad and rogue stealing the memory and is jealous of the Princess...however a little worried that Simon is going to die! PLease no

Your stories are just so... beautiful!


I cried in almost all of them..
But why did you kill Simon?
The poor thing was so lovely!
Anyways, your going great...
This is one of my favorite stories...
That's it.


*goes to the hospital to cry over Simon's dead body =P*


Why, Simon, why?!?!



(bad english, my fault. I'm brazilian)

No! Yuo cant kill Simon now!
seriously, you have a great story here that has kept me on the edge on my seat for at least the last two chapters. Update soon!

This story is starting to become a little irritating the way Remy is being portrayed. He himself went to Sinister for help and was "back stabbed" by Sinister for all intents and purposes.

Now you are implying that Xavier is the same type of "user" just like Sinister. I just can't see that Remy would come to that conclusion. Is there any guarantee that Xavier would be able to help Jules? No of course not since he would not try to exploit it for his own benefit! But he did help Cyke, Logan & other's. Some became X-men, other's (i.e. Dazzler)went their own way.

Having Remy constantly lumping all the Xmen including those who had "nothing" to do with the "trial" and whose "stated lesson's" have always been to "give everyone even Magneto!" a chance is unreasonable IMHO. Xavier even let James Proudstar off the hook when he invaded the Cheyenne Mountain site while trying to kill him, this caused major problems for the x-men with the government at that time!

You have such a fascinating premise and a well thought out OC, but due to this "axe to grind", it is painful to read in a way.

Really the most blame should go to the Marvel writer's who came up with such a "crock of dung" that they wrote into canon in the first place. It was not their first major issue I have with them and certainly not the last. (to name a few, Ilyanna's death, Antartica, Cyclop's Jean & E. Frost triangle...sadly too many others to mention).

O...I am so happy to see that you updated and a long chpater made it all the better! Poor Remy being shipped back home although i am guessing that he will be popping up occassionally...will there be a chance for Rogue anf Jules to get together? Is there a change for romance?/

Storm and Wolverine had nothing to do with Anartica? Not in the comics I read. Storm checked in on Rogue repeatedly and understood her and was mad at Gambit too and Wolverine even called him names and none of them went back for him. I don't mind people holding Rogue responsible for what she did but it doesn't work to try to white wash Logan's indifference and superiority about what Gambit did (he's always been more Rogue's friend than Gambit's) and Storm's anger over the Massacre - she was the Morlock's leader at the time and was very upset about the massacre at the same time. It wasn't until all of it including Rogue's feelings were retconned that any of the X-Men (Though Scott seemed the most uninvolved while Logan and Jean were both making nasty remarks about Gambit) weren't fully in agreement with Rogue leaving Gambit behind. The writers at the time fully admitted they thought all the X-Men should reject Gambit and were set to have Storm do it specifically when she met him until editorial nixed the idea. It's an interesting idea but I get really tired of seeing Storm and Wolverine not held up as being the hypocrites they were as well.

This is a very unique story you started. Your OC is actually quite interesting. I would recommend however, don't make her into an "Omega". The best part of your story is the "human" elements you are bringing out with her interactions with Remy, her cousins and Billy. Now in a new environment at Xavier's, I am sure she will have more to interact with. Because of that there is no need to make her any more powerful than any other mutant around...Good story, I will look forward to your next chapter.
p.s. I was not aware that C. Xavier had anything to do with Remy's exile in Antartica. He seems kinda mad at him however.

YES! I loved Remy's reaction to Rogue! It's exactly what she deserves! I love Logan and Stormy being together, they work so well as a couple. :) You have to let Simon be okay! Please? Pretty please? Poor Jules is so upset. :( Lovely chapter as always. As long as you keep the witch away from my Remy (and his baby girl) I'll be a happy camper.

BRILLIANT!! I LOVE YOU (in a writer fan way only!) So relieved that Rogue is alone...yepiie! Though I know you don't want this is a Romy fic I can dream away!! I do think though that Simon is a lovely character ...if onyl he was real, he would cheer me up in the grey cold weather in scotland.
About your friend...that is awful and some of my mates have gone the same way but only remember the good times because drowning in misery is won't bring them back... i hope you get back on your feet soon

Great chapter!! Did not see it coming...love that Logan and Storm are together and that he is suffering on holiday...wonderful!! Please, please tell me that Rogue does not have a family too or I will cry!! I don't think that the cousins are going to be in the cousins good books for long! This is just what I needed after heavy essay work! Thanks!