please update soon.

please update.

well it's definitley improving and the detail in the descriptions are better too. Gold star for improvement ...now just work on your spelling and sentence structure ...hehe -like I can talk- I like where this is ging and thanks for the message ...no I didn't see a new chapter was up. Seems like they are gonna have some fighting to do! ...I'm looking forward to it!

hey write more to this story really interesting

That was awesome and your stories would be even bette iffor example ...Kagome: InuYasha! Do you even know where we are going?

instead of writing when the character is speaking ike that write it differently.

Kagome sighed and rolled her eyes as she followed slowly behind the demon of the group. " Inuyasha! Do you even know where were going?" She waited for his reply, expecting one as sarcastic and "nice" as usual. Being Inuyasha he wasn't one to dissapoint ...

see something like that would make it easier and more enjoyable to read!! besides chapter three ws much better and it proves that you can do it so I hope to read a great next chapter Andrew!

write more. i dont feel like talking.