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Emerald Imagination
2009-12-13 . chapter 31
First of all, I wanted to thank you for keeping me up all night with your story when I really should've gotten to bed earlier. But I'm really enjoying this story. I was hesitant about modern Pride & Prejudices, but yours really stands out. There's good grammar and spelling and all of that, but the characters are brilliant. I do hope you update rather soon. It would be such a shame if you didn't. Thanks for sharing!
julesabc
2009-12-11 . chapter 2
Dee, We haven't heard from you in a while. I hope all is well with you in your life. Love this story, hope you can update soon :)
Ollygoughbritely
2009-11-29 . chapter 31
Oh my! I just found this story again! I forgot how much I loved it. Please update and continue soon! <3!!
wonderlandbomb.
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
Okay, yeah, I know this isn't exactly a chapter to review, but it made me laugh. I'm looking forward to reading the rest! :)
LawisJustice
2009-11-27 . chapter 31
These last few chapters are wonderful, while being truly evil. I can't wait for the happy ending and I won't entertain the thought that there won't be one. Update soon! I need all the warm and fuzzies back. (Now I have to go and watch some Hugh Grant, thanks.) ^_^
Jelly Babes 101
2009-11-26 . chapter 1
nice preface :D
KindOfAPickle
2009-11-26 . chapter 31
First P and P fic I have ever read, and I am glad to say this is off to a good start. It was hard for me to picture 'Lizzie and Darcy" instead of "Bella and Edward", but I got the hang of it, and it bloody rocks. Thanks for updating!

Pickle.
lyrazim
2009-11-21 . chapter 31
Ugh. Dude. Seriously!
I like to think I'm a patient girl, but you've left us hanging for a long time now!
I want to know what happens :)
I hope you update soon because your story's the best.
All the best.
Lerdo
2009-11-20 . chapter 31
Hi there. :) I'm not sure how I stumbled upon this story, but I'm happy I did. Though I wasn't quite sure what to expect, I've been nothing less than entertained. This is a fun little fic, and I think you have stayed true to the spirit of the original, what with the sharp dialogue, wit, and social commentary contained therein.

Great conversation between Will and Sean in this chapter. Glad to hear that Will isn't giving up on Lizzie just yet.

Looking fwd to seeing how Will gets himself out of the doghouse. ;) Thanks for sharing.
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 6
Brava. And the image of Darcy throwing rocks at homeless people incites two emotions:

1. Hysteria. Funny as mess.

2. Outrage. I love hobos.

Also, I've got to get one of those shirts... With the censor of course.
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 5
Sexyback? Appropriate.

Use of FOB song title? Even better.
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 4
I enjoyed it anyway.
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 3
1. She should have kneed him in the balls.

2. I want to be Lizzie when I grow up.

3. Christ on a cracker? I mean, it would be pretty interesting to see a human being on a cracker, I don't think that's how it happened. Lovely phrase, though. ; )
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 2
Ahem. *thunderous applause* I am hooked. And shoving on past the "literary value" of your story (I hate that phrase), I'd just like to say, that it made me laugh like a cow/duck/unknown creature that frightens little children. ... That's a good thing by the way. Moving on to the next chapter. *crosses fingers*
I Am Devonna Ransom
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
Pre-marital sex makes me a bit squeamish, I do not cuss, and could not, in any universe imagine Elizabeth and Will saying anything close to it. However, sex is everywhere, I laugh my butt off (without an ounce of guilt) at anyone who can apply a sprinkle of wit to curse words (or just curse words themselves), and I lied. I CAN see Liz flinging obsceneties at Darcy while throwing his clothes out on the front lawn for all the neighboors to witness his moment of shame. Not to mention, I have an adequate supply of hair grease that I put to good use. Thank YOU for making it through this nonsensical and utterly uselss almost review.

This message has been brought to you by Devonna Ransom, future world dictator, who is quite simply too lazy to waste any energy on something that can even be confused with witty. ... That is all.
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