Ooh! Ooh! Cool! I mean, hot! Hah! Serve you right you evil Ozai! Is Azzie doing well? I love Azula, she was always so hot in canon. Can I have the fire sibs next?


P.S. Did you know you rock?

Ah, I love seeing Ozai screwed over...most of the time, anyway. Certainly in this instance. Water sibs?

Ah Zuko, dear boy. He saw the truth of his sister's...issues and still followed that thread of compassion. :) Very interesting.

Oh wow...the implications of that have the potential to be so sad...

So twisted and so ironic. Very nice.

I don't know where my sick sense of humor is coming from, but all I could think about is Azula making brainwashed!Zuko do the "Putting on the Ritz" act from Young Frankenstein. o_0

That is wonderfully twisted. Love it. Azula as a Joo Dee is a really scary thought. That smile...o_0

I dunno why, but I get a sick sort of pleasure from seeing Azula humbled like this. Long Feng is such a twisted jerk, but I can't help feeling a bit sorry for him. Unfortunately for Azula, revenge is best served cold.

Beautifully bitter, I love the last 2 sentences in particular.

Deliciously unexpected...and it has made all the difference. :)
Ah, Ozai, you never did have the same strength as your son...

Nice work on this as always. Keep at it!

poor ozai. zhou needs to be put in his place one of these days. we should call up that ocean spirit again!

i vote fire sibs next!

LOL! Always good to see Ozai's dreams beaten out of him considering how twisted they are. We've seen a lot of the FN so maybe an WT chapter is in order. You did say something about waking Aang up early didn't you? If not then it'll still be a good story seeing Ozai in Zuko's place. Of course Ozai might just kill Aang and burn Sokka and Katar's village even after Anag would surrender, like he did to Zuko.

I think it's time to head South.

I love this series; it shows how just one action, one little turning point can become the catalyst to great change.

Maybe you should have one where Katara and Sokka's mother never died; maybe it was Hakoda instead. That would be an interesting world, i'm sure.

Please, keep going!

Oh, wow, you didn't have to dedicate this entire chapter to me. o3o My review was nothing special, really. I was just saying what I thought.

And I was thinking, if a character is yelling or saying something loudly, maybe you should have exclamation marks as well as saying 'he yelled/she exclaimed/Ozai roared'. I don't know, but it makes for odd reading when the dialogue is even and calm and then suddenly, bam, we find out that the character is actually screaming it.

But I like how Zhao betrayed Ozai for Zuko. But knowing Zuko, he probably won't have Zhao as his advisor anyways?~