 anglekitty 2009-07-07 . chapter 1awsome job i love it! |
 Noxoy 2007-10-31 . chapter 1 It is very cute and very belivable but I think you mean TEmari and not TAmari |
 Haseo The Terror of Death 2007-02-24 . chapter 1I thought this was very well written. Even though I am a fan of InoxShikamaru, I found this very cool. To think, Shikamaru hates Diet soda. I believe you should follow up with stories about Shikamaru and Temari. Maybe I can offer a name for it: The Life of Shikamaru and Temari. |
 Kira the Great 2007-02-19 . chapter 1 Awe, that was cute...normally I don't like storys like that, but it was great =) Poor Shika-kunb and his love of coke getting him into troubles... |
 demonangelneo 2006-11-17 . chapter 1i'd be like shikamaru and jolt out of bed if someone said that to me.i couldn't think of a life without regular coke. |
 Exclamation mark and co. 2006-11-04 . chapter 1Great fic! Very...ehh, interesting. Write more ShikaTema fics and read my fic The Wind and the Shadows please and review! (It's a serious fic no comedy) |
 almostinsane 2006-10-19 . chapter 1Great story! This was very well-written! God bless! |
 November Raine 2006-10-18 . chapter 1Hey H., if you don't have my penname memorized yet this is R. So D. helped you with this one? Anyway, I found it. It's kind of funny to try and picture Shikamaru moving fast for anything, especially a coke. It was interesting though. |
 Crystal Jaganshi 2006-10-17 . chapter 1Her name is spelled Temari. But I did enjoy this. It was wquite humerous. |