Good.

Sad-ish.

Overall,

Awesome.

-fav-

oh nice. i was singing the dong in my head as i was reading it. =)

It's beautiful.
I was listening to the piano version of the song and right when i started the 'Hold me' part the part of that song came too.
I was surprised. It felt too early, but just right.
I love them.

yes good.
not bad.
kinda sad.
but really cute.

YAY!
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good, and wonderfully hopeful/sad

beautiful, for once i liked a fic that included the lyrics IN the actual oneshot XD not just inspirations

i always love to read your inspirations, i think its great that you acknowledge that ideas come from things ^_^
and i do MASSIVE amounts of art, so I know what its like to sketch someone and try and throw it away if you miss them, i almost laugh at the irony, although the me-liking-him-thing didn't last too much longer, cause of stuff

...why did i type all that O_o?? anyway, great job once again

so sweet. i was gonna do a one shot like this except with kairi and sora. then i thought about making a drawing instead. this is great. i'd read more but i'm being kicked out of the computer. oh well. i'll read more tomorrow!

Sad and quite good.

Aw... how sweet... though I can't picture Jesse McCartney singing Simple and Clean :p

Nice story, it almost made me cry ^^

Aww...so sweet...I loved it!

wow.
this story was great!
i love the namine/roxas pairing, and you didn't screw up the couple like other stories i've read!!
yay!
i loved the descriptions for everything; not overloaded with it, but not lacking it.
overall, i loved the story!
now if only more people would read it and review...

aw cute!

*wipes away tear* Beautiful. Truly, absolutely beautiful. I simply adorred how ypou put in Simple and Clean. I loved the part were you had those two sing it together. It really went well with this story, and reminded me very much of Sora and Kairi. You have written a truly brilliant fic. Congrats! RoxasXNamine, SoraXKairi 4eva!
T~H~S