Excellent story! I especially enjoyed the bang-on Brass characterization. Actually, I liked that it was Dark!Brass. Very believable and a nice twist on what we normally see written about him. Oh, and his dialogue that you wrote was so witty. :D

And I loved the Sara-Sophia tension. I've been rewatching season 5, and it's right out there, so I was glad to see some more of that.

And Kinky!Grissom? Simply divine! Very subtly done, but very effective.

Nice story. It keeps me longing for a sequel, though. I'd like to know about Grissom's past ... hm

Hahahahahaha, poor Grissom. The old, panty hand-off. Maybe not immediately before he has to process a scene though, he's going to be very distracted.

Excellent writing, as usual!

hi excellent story! the trick with the jump suit sounds pretty damn amazing wish I could do that. please keep writing

Excellent!

He. Nice story.

Very cute... neatly done.

OMG i can relate so well! hope i get the chance to do something like that! Wounderful story

That was just plain awesome! I really enjoyed your portrayl of the more saucy side of Sara. Thanks for sharing this fun piece)

Absolutely delicious! The only thing that would make this story better would be a sequel in which Brass (who presumably got an eyeful) nails Grissom. Thanks!

Gosh, do you know how much I love your writing? I wrote something along a similar vein once (using the whole "get your underwear into Grissom's hand" thing), and for

OH kay! the sex will be hot tonight. Oh to be that lucky.

Favorite Line: ...putting just a little extra sway in her hips.
Work it Sara Work it!

Least Favorite Line: END

This tempting little ficlet is screaming for another chapter!

Hey, what a cute story! Never heard about an "unseen" strip! Wonderful idea! And a "drooling" Grissom! Very well done! Thanks for that! heike

Yeah, I would have totally paid money to see that!

I love snippets into Sara and Grissom's relationship. Nice work!