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| Drakkenfyre 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent story! I especially enjoyed the bang-on Brass characterization. Actually, I liked that it was Dark!Brass. Very believable and a nice twist on what we normally see written about him. Oh, and his dialogue that you wrote was so witty. :D And I loved the Sara-Sophia tension. I've been rewatching season 5, and it's right out there, so I was glad to see some more of that. And Kinky!Grissom? Simply divine! Very subtly done, but very effective. |
| MajandraNova 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseNice story. It keeps me longing for a sequel, though. I'd like to know about Grissom's past ... hm |
| misselise 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abuseHahahahahaha, poor Grissom. The old, panty hand-off. Maybe not immediately before he has to process a scene though, he's going to be very distracted. Excellent writing, as usual! |
| MYBIGBLUEBOX 2006-12-23 ch 1, | abusehi excellent story!! the trick with the jump suit sounds pretty damn amazing wish I could do that. please keep writing |
| Beaglicious 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseExcellent! |
| Schlampcat 2006-11-04 ch 1, | abuseHe. Nice story. |
| CrysWimmer 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseVery cute... neatly done. |
| Amazon 2006-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG i can relate so well! hope i get the chance to do something like that! Wounderful story |
| microgirl 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was just plain awesome! I really enjoyed your portrayl of the more saucy side of Sara. Thanks for sharing this fun piece :) |
| Chicklit 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely delicious! The only thing that would make this story better would be a sequel in which Brass (who presumably got an eyeful) nails Grissom. :) Thanks! |
| jrh927 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseGosh, do you know how much I love your writing? I wrote something along a similar vein once (using the whole "get your underwear into Grissom's hand" thing), and for |
| anneruhland 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseOH kay! the sex will be hot tonight. Oh to be that lucky. |
| JackofSpade 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseFavorite Line: ...putting just a little extra sway in her hips. Work it Sara Work it! Least Favorite Line: END This tempting little ficlet is screaming for another chapter! |
| Zamboni 2006-10-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, what a cute story! Never heard about an "unseen" strip! Wonderful idea! And a "drooling" Grissom! Very well done! Thanks for that! heike |
| Taletha 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I would have totally paid money to see that! I love snippets into Sara and Grissom's relationship. Nice work! |