are you going to update soon? this story is really has a deasent plot

you can find the complete wording on you tube when you type in dragon slave or dragon slave english same goes for the giga slave

i really really like your story!
please update soon =D
i want to see the rest of the new 'students' come to hogwarts.
i love how the story is flowing.

First off...spell check is your friend.
I think the International relations guy swearing an oath without a good reason seemed off.
I also don't think Amelia Bones would have screamed. It's contrary to the politician she is. Neither would Lu.
It did ruin Malfoy though...so I liked that. No doubt with the scene Lu was causing alot of people would have heard it.

I do like how Malfoy got ruined with a snap! Although Ranma demanding a fourth of his estate and money seemed really off. I don't think he would or should have done that. Jail and an actual fine would have done the trick. Although Ranma should have been less rude and formally challenged him to a duel, I do think what he did was in character.
I liked how easily it was to get Harry off since they had no case to begin with.
Since Harry's got diplomatic immunity, Umbridge won't be able to touch him! That is...if she isn't arrested first! Bwahaha!
Malfoy the younger isn't going to like all this. He's definitely going to be going for some vengeance!
For the most part, I enjoyed this chapter.

Interesting story so far, however, there are a few grammar mistakes so you might want to reread your chapters.

What really bugs me is...why on earth is Jusenkyo sharing trade secrets like potion recipes? Even if they are currently allied, they may not be in the future. No government would do that. That's like the US or UK sharing national secrets with each other for no reason. It's only understandable if it's on a need to know basis. And even then, it'd only be fair if The Order gave them secrets in turn.

And this assistance is unofficial correct? The Order is a vigilante group. Not a government. Official help would reflect badly on them since they haven't even notified the government and just basically snuck in.


Sorry. This isn't to be mean or anything, but it kinda bugs me. Other than that, I've enjoyed the story so far.

I especially liked how Ryouga gets turned into a child (he deserved it...that brat) and the prank. I liked how Molly took the sudden change in a stride and yelled at the twins for their immodesty.
Your portrayal of Dumbledore is fine.

I can't wait until the next chapter. I hate the ministry with a passion and I just know that Ranma's going to make a fool out of them. He should challenge them to a duel. It'd rock.

Yo... when are you going to update? I'm just curious... because it's been over a year, and I really love this story.

When you wrote that Fudge said "That is propitious", did you actually mean preposterous? Propitious, according to the dictionary, means "favorably inclined."

Your proofreader failed to notice several sentences lacking quotation. I don't think it's a formatting error, since most others DO have formatting.

Absolutely love the way that things have developed. This is definitely in my top Ranma xovers now, I can't wait to see the potential hijinks surrounding Ranma's double identity at Hogwarts.

Will we see any more cameos from the Ranma cast?

Good overall. The undecover pair of Tonka and Ranma-chan is probably the best part so far. The biggest issue with the story I see so far is Ranma is well post Saffron Ranma, and now he is Ranma with a formidable amount of magical power, with the backing of a powerful group. It is possible that things are being set up to be a bit too easy for the good guys..

I love the story! Has it been abandoned?

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update this fic soon, I just got to know what happens next, also why can't Ranma just use the Naban Mirror to go back in time instead of using the Time Turners?

please update

-Nice . . . I like what you're doing; the only issue I have is that you need to update it.

Happy writing, and update soon!

Rowan is a type of tree, but I'll assume you meant the pedigree of horse. And Mauve is a pale purple, or a flower known as Mallow.

So either Pale Purple Horse or Pale Flower Horse?

Also what with how much you delve into Harry Potter, I was sorely disappointed to see that Ryouga is going to lose his Martial Arts.

Why would you do that?