Coolio. thats wat i thought their relationship was

The story was well written and entertaining but canon fan fic isn't really my thing, I was hoping it was a Trunks based story but I thought it was a very interesting story and you are a talented writer.

Such a sad ending... I hope to see a sequel!
This must be one of the best stories I have EVER read, and I mean it. The OC characters for once aren't used as love interrests fro the DBZ characters, great change. Also, the not so happy ending is different from usual, and leaves the story open for sequels. Can't wait! Brilliant work!

x Nouk

er... why did you post the same chapter twice?

Good story. Sorry i didn't review more but i just got caught up on the rest of the story.

Awesome. Good one Arius. You really are good.

Holy crap! My head exploded!

. . . and then reformed!

And then exploded again!

. . . and reformed!

And when it exploded again, it rained delicious maple syrup and chunks of saltwater taffy over a crowd of happy children!

And then my headless body mounted a motorcycle and sped off into the purple sunset, leaving blazing trails of hot fudge in its wake.

I take it the blast worked since you said this was the last chapter in the saga. You always could have just killed everyone off and made it a really surprising ending.

Keep it up.

Sweet... i'm going to start reading them all now. Good stuff.

Interesting twists

Keep up the good work

Is Korin Tower still around. If so you might consider having the Z-warriors get some sensu beans. They could use them.

Well isn't that interesting? Tempest found them before they were ready. We'll have to see where this is going to go?

Isn't it odd how all of the villian's power is unmatchable until the Saiyans get that strong then they are wimps. Take Tempest for example, he may be really really strong but if Goku were around and could go Super Saiyan 3, he'd be nothing. The same thing happened with Buu. He was unstopable until Goku and Vegeta beat him. Now here's a twist. YOu could have Temest somehow revive Buu. That would be a good fight. And it would also stall for time for the good guys to train and make the situation that much more dire when there are two "unstopable villians" rampaging around.