Reviews for You Had Me At Hello

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Zetnnik 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseThat is just so sweet, charming and adorable. All that practicing and then stuttered when she was right there! Aw... so adorable, Naruto! :o)
10tative 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuselol lol lol im sorry, i really had great time while reading this. it amused me to no end. despite the genre is not a humor, i really cant stop laugh while reading this, even after finish read this story... chuckle there are so many hilarious 'picking line' lol “If I had a single flower for every time I think about you, I could walk forever in my garden.” “Anyone can catch your eye, but it takes someone special to catch your heart.”--> quote romantic, but imagining it came from naruto, its just made burst out laughing (also, somehow it sound sickly sweet xD) “If you don't love me, it does not matter, anyway I can love for both of us.” --> persistent, are we? lol "Love is a hidden fire… a pleasant sore… a delicious poison…a delectable pain…an agreeable torment… a sweet and throbbing wound… a gentle death." --> ahahahahahaha... “A part of you has grown in me. And so you see, it's you and me together forever and never apart, maybe in distance, but never in heart.” --> well thought, especially 'never in heart' part it kinda back up the line, though, no matter what, i still find it amusing lol “At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet.” --> now, thats explained the situation that got naruto suddenly like a poet... nodding head understandingly, and seconds later resume to laughing mode ’Hi, Hinata… I like you a lot… let’s kiss,’ --> i say, very clever of naruto to consider this becoz, don't we usually hear 'i like u a lot, lets make love!' LOL “Love is friendship set on fire.” --> bah, reason damn reason :D “How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height my soul can reach, when feeling out of sight, for the ends of Being and ideal Grace.” --> o__O don't get it pretty much, but not lessen the funny impact Wait. If he thought she was beautiful, what was stopping some other guy from feeling the same way? And, that other guy might be better looking, and much more eloquent. “I better practice some more!” --> yeah, other guy might notice her, so u must MAKE your move NOW, instead of practicing!! rolling eye lol “Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.” “It is love alone that gives worth to all things.” --> okay, nicely said, but what the use? xD “Life is the flower for which love is the honey.” --? gee, where this getting at? xD “Of what does a true kiss consist? Ambrosia on which gods subsist. Tremendous heat which sun can't give. God's heaven in one moment lived." --> lololololololol “For you see, each day I love you more, today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.” Well? Was that true? But, at that given moment, it brought up the whole ‘What is love’ question, and he was confused enough as it was. “Stop thinking so much!” It didn’t work with jutsus. It probably wouldn’t work with romance. --> so damn true! :D “Each morning as I awaken you’re the reason I smile, you’re the reason I love.” "It's not that I can't live without you, it's that I don't even want to try." “Life without love is like a tree without blossoms or fruit.” --> corny ^0^ “Doubt that the stars are fire. Doubt that the sun doth move. Doubt truth to be a liar. But never doubt I love. ” “I need the starshine of your heavenly eyes, after the day's great sun.” --> giggle giggle those like something that romeo would said, and here naruto said it... naruto in romeo image...PRICELESS!! lol “In the arithmetic of love, one plus one equals everything, and two minus one equals nothing.” --> guess, maybe its an equation of love, or maybe the way mathematician viewing the love xD OMG so many pick up line. so may verse he practiced, and the moment she came in front of him, he messed up!! LOL and what amused me more is, she just need a simple "hello"! rolling with laughter so much for naruto to be a romeo... -pfft- anyway, i enjoy reading this so much. luv it even hope u dont mind this long and random review have a good day, coz u just made my day with this story :D
Creative Spark 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuse"KAWAII!" You have adorable ideas. Great job. -Spark
SunnyHinata 2008-02-03 ch 1,	abuse-claps her hands- :D
NirvanaSword 2007-10-13 ch 1,	abuse**! HInata would have fainted!
redlei 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuselmao funny how he kept messing up xD sweet ending tho
Quackpotty 2007-09-13 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story! The way Naruto ended up was typical of him. Usually he's a loudmouth and overly confident, but he actually acts a little more like himself around Hinata, even in the series. Thanks for the cool story, I'm looking forward to reading many more. Cool. NJOY!!
Amari Kazama 2007-05-12 ch 1,	abusenice!!
xxkoffeexx 2006-12-28 ch 1,	abuseKyaah! I was waiting for that phrase... what perfect timing! This was fun and cute to read. Great job!
pinoykengumi7 2006-12-02 ch 1,	abuse-dies- XD Naruto is just a crack up :P -grins- Very well written and sweet ending ^^ --Duckii Mustang
Silver Warrior 2006-12-01 ch 1,	abusethat...was so beautiful. I know you got inspiration for this from a song (or at least it's title). all those sappy, romantic things Naruto said over the course of those, were beautiful.
thedisturbedone666666 2006-11-07 ch 1,	abusei don't usually R&R oneshot romances, but this one was grande... it was exactly what naruto would've done, the thinking too much and ending up screwing up part, i mean... arigato gozimas, dave-d, and continue to write sappy stories, for they quench my thirst for love lol
Bella~Rose 2006-10-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseAw! That's so cute. Though i think you mispelled cloud. -Bella
Abikageisure 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseaw!
Hiei's Cute Girl 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseWhat a silly boy, she heard the whole thing! ^^ Please, if you will, do update in your other stories!

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