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| ReJo 2007-01-19 ch 1,  | abuseYes, I was fooled. I had to scroll down to make sure it was a DL story. My nerves were too bad for the suspense. VERY good story. |
| artigiano 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abusethat was such a good story! i have to say, at first i really did think that lily was danny's girlfriend, and i liked how you led us on that way. :) great job! |
| Boleyn 2006-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseAhh, how did I miss this? Very sweet and enjoyable! I wasn't fooled by Lily - I KNOW you are a D/L shipper and would never be so cruel to us. :P Beautifully written, and I loved most the 1/2/3 questions. Ahh, fluff! Bravo! |
| sparkyCSI 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very nice. Love Lily, she's great!! I can't wait for the update of Chasing Hope! :D Nice to have you back. :D |
| meadow567 2006-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked it. It was really good. I did think she was a girlfriend... good job. |
| storynverse 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseFooled me! A very sweet, Danny and his sister. *I LOVE Wicked. I recognized the title and had to read. Its time to try defying gravity... |
| ladybug1115 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseWell, you fooled me for the first few paragraphs. Great story. |
| The Little Corinthian 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseMy reaction was "Lindsay- no, Lily- ...wait, HUH?" :0P It's all good. VERY nice! I oohed and awwed all the way through. I love the thought of Danny as an older brother, and Lily seems like a pretty good character, as well :0P Nice job! |
| chili-peppers 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI was! i thought Lily was dannys g.f! haha well done you got me lol...Briliant story! loved it! good job |
| ChocoBetty 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I got caught... I thought Lily was Dannys new girlfriend, interest of the week or whatever. Maybe even somebody he was with to get over Lindsay. Another option was, at first, that it was from the perspektiv of another person in the restaurant where Danny got stood up. I really wasn't sure where this would might lead, but I liked it. Somehow I hope they will finally manage to get together, so that there is a canon pairing. |
| all the glitters 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abuseLovely! You threw me off actually! I thought that Lily was Danny's date first. Great fic! It's so fun and relaxing. and its like "You've fallen in love. Congratulations!" and clapping... WONDERFUL! |
| A 2006-10-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'll admit it, you threw me there for a sec. I quite like the end of the story though. :) |
| dddynamite 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseYes I thought that...I love the way you write! |
| I Can Hear the Sea 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHA. "Fallen in love, doofus!" That line got me laughing like crazy. No idea why, but it did. |
| CSI-girl419 2006-10-17 ch 1, | abuseI'll admit it, you totally suckered me into thinking she was his girlfriend, but I liked that twist in the story; good idea! Great story! Keep up the awesome work. |