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I LOVED IT~

Alright, i'll start at the top.
The duel scene was really well played out. Seemed like you did your research and got all the cards right~
Got a wee bit long and draggy just like on tv and that's what made it more action packed at the end. Nice job and descriptions.

Lol. Awe Poor poor Tristan~ i've always had a soft spot for the boy, but an even softer one for Joe, so I'm glad he won in the end.

The gun part... was really really good. You used alot of great details that made me feel like i was in the story~

And of course Kaiba to the rescue, totally cliche and wonderful~ hehe.

The character's are in character and stay true to thier attitudes. Nicely done~

The short people joke about yugi made me laugh~ lol.

Humorous, serious, adventure, and romance all tied into one~ ^.^

Hope you update very soon~ i'll look forward to it~

^_^ Awe, you updated!

I liked it~
But poor poor Tristan, What did he do that's so horrible? Are ya gonna tell us, or leave it to our imaginations?

I love the Tea/Joey pairing! It's my favorite~

Anyways~ I like where the story is going, and I love all the subtle little hints between Kaiba and Serenity~
Also, I like the pace the story moves at, it makes it feel like a real tv episode or something~ It's good, and fast-paced, and doesn't get boring being stuck with description. I like that.

I'm excited to read the duel scene~ so I can't wait for another chapter!

Good work. can't find anything to critisize. ^^

The way you word some things are amazing. A very nice chapter, this was very interesting, even the duel. In most fics they don't pay much attention to the duels, even thought that's what the series was about. Very good chapter, love, very good. Keep it up.

T.S.O.H

Yugi/Serenity~ I never pictured it. I like it, it was surprising.

Once again, the dialouge is great~
Yugi seemed a little pessimistic in some places, but surely sounded like a love-sick fool.

I like the way you capture each character, give them their own voice, and stay true to their attitude throughout. It gives the story suspense and keeps it flowing nicely.

Poor Yugi. v.v
He's stuck in the friends spot. XD

Anyways~ Really nice description throughout, and good word choice.

Can't wait for the next Chapter!
Update Soon!

I really Love this story~

The pairings are cute. And you made the plot very creative~
It's origional, and surprising at the same time!
Nicely written.

Anyways, the dialouge between Characters was very well done. It sounded very in-character with the show. (except for in the movie scene, but they were acting~)

Good description in alot of parts, especially in the kiss scene. Joey's a good big-bro~

The rest is really humorous and I like it.
Very Good story~ Hope you decide to Update Soon!

Come on Joey, kick that bastard's **! Please make him win, it would really boast up the relationship between him and Tea. Unlike others, I think they're cute together. Oh and Kaiba and Serenity got their little time together. Keep it up!

T.S.O.H

aww...yugi? i would've never thought...i guess there ARE some yugixserenity out there...i've never seen one...but anyways...luv ur style of writing...kepp going!^_^

Talk about multible pairings. Who's she going to choose? Shorty or Kaiba, sorry, I love Yugi a lot. I think he's very cute. I hope she chooses... Nevermind it's your story.
Seeya
T.S.O.H

Again funny! but poor Yugi!

That was funny!! The movie was making no secne. After that it was funny! hehe