omfg that was priceless XD the ending was great. Good story keep up the good work ^-^

the ending...
it's quite...not so romantic
not at all

hm...it was okay...

U gotta expand a little more on the fic, but that was a good ending. lol.

BANG BANG!!

AH~! kiraa and the others saw them naked? on the floor? without clothes? (--blushes--)
...your fic of lemon was rushed but no worries~! It's great~!!
Write more like that~! ^_^