Loved it. Favorite lines:

"Yeah, well at least SOMETHING around here’s silent."

"Sammy," he said evenly, "if I eat some ** oatmeal and a goddamn apple, will you stop making the world cry with your emo eyes?"

"This body –" Dean gestured grandly "—is a temple."
"To a really licentious god," Sam muttered.

Sammy throughout was so sweet and funny and Dean was so Dean. I loved his seemingly blasé attitude about having his face ripped off. You had the dialogue down perfectly. It made me smile. Thank you.

I liked this one, too. Actually, it's pretty rare that someone who does so very powerful, emotional and bettersweat-sad stuff like you, can also write a fun story like this one. - Congrats!

Please keep going - I'll keep reading.
Take care! D.

'Sam’s emo-eyes watched him carefully, still tinged with woe'

rofl =) you are my hero

OMG again ... you are an absolute riot! ROFL ... that was so funny, and the Dean snark was spot on!! And Sammy with the Emo eyes making the world sad ROFL ;0) - I loved it! Your stories are such a pleasure to read ... thanks for sharing you amazing talent with us!!
Kind regards
Merisha ;0)

Haha, very funny and very cute! Nice work!

LOL. the part when the nurse keeps telling Dean to think of happy thoughts makes me laugh every time. Great one-shot.

lol lol lol lol ! Wow, you completely got the hand on them never-ending insult banters ! Wonderful ! Ohh, gosh ... I think I got cramps in my cheeks...

Oh wow. "The Puppy Look of Doom". That's freaking awesome! XD
Poor Dean :)

Hilarous! I know this already has like a million reviews but I had to tell you how funny it was, and how perfectly the dialouge fit with Sam and Dean's characters. Made my night, thanks!

So excellent. Hilarious fun. They're so in character. My favourite line is, "Like Scully, if she’d decided to be a pole dancer instead of join the FBI."

This one really made me laugh and giggle and act all happy, like a freaking moron. How true that Dean was telling Sammy all about how great his BP was before, DURING, and after his romp with a nurse. This definitely made my day so much brighter. Thanks for the laugh!

If making me 'hear' the boys in my head and having everyone in the office staring at me as I laughed out loud behind mine hands is a good thing...then you done good.
That was a hoot. I plan to send the link to a friend.

Very vey nicely done.

Phyllis

Now there's a happy ending! :) Favorite Line: "Seriously," he said, seriously. Thanks, another great story!

Heh heh... the "Puppy Look of Doom" comment made me spill coffee all over my desk when I suddenly snorted with laughter.

Great fic! :)

Heh heh heh, poor Dean.

'Dean took a deep, deep breath and let it out between his teeth. He could feel his pulse in his right eye. Was that bad? Who the ** knew? "Sammy," he said evenly, "if I eat some ** oatmeal and a goddamn apple, will you stop making the world cry with your emo eyes?"'

You are a genius and this story was hilarious; I was laughing the entire time! Great job.