Reviews for Heart Less Love

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Daemon hunter 2008-07-16 ch 13,	abuseWell once again you find me at a loss for words. But I know this much at least: your story is fantastic. There are so many things about this story I enjoy. The first thing that springs to mind is the banter between Tifa and Cloud. I love how you make it so entertaining (the unexpected cold springs to mind), and I like it even more that you don't portray Cloud as some sort of manic depressive. The relationship between the two leading ladies is of course done wonderfully. It's funny how I found myself taking Tifa's side in their argument and then immediately feeling bad for doing so. And poor Rissy. She can never get a break. But as well as that, I just love the way they interact with both each other and with others. It's simply done so well. Maybe I'll be able to think of more (intelligent) things to add to my next review for your next chapter... see how subtle I was there?
Khon 2008-07-08 ch 13, anon.	abusecontinue on plz. Great story so far! And geez did Yuffie go beserk. Hahaha loving it, I really liked the last few lines.
LicketySplat 2008-07-04 ch 13,	abuseThis hapter was a tad confusing at some parts. Took me a while to realise that Aerith was recalling her past memories. Perhaps you could make that recollection somewhat easier to differentiate from the current action. Yuffie was...scary there. But it's all for the plot, I know. Another great enrapturing chapter. I hope Tifa gets to apologise to Aerith soon. Update soon! :)
Ekilow lettyion 2008-07-04 ch 13,	abuseWah! Cliffhanger! I can't believe Yuffie actually left! RAWR. Cloud and Vincent lecturing Tifa was fun. :) Update soon~!
Silent Ee 2008-06-23 ch 12,	abusewait...no, I'm dreaming rubs eyes Good lord woman, its an update! Dammit! I need to find that tissue box again don't I. and now I have to read the whole thing again, cause for some odd reason I have gotten a bit fuzzy on the storyline...I wonder how that happened. :) You kinds made my day more than usual...working standby..stuck in the corner, and I have to be quiet ...I'm bored with my book..now I have much better stuff to read! I'm glad to see you back kiddo...just wary of how much angst is gonna whallop me...oh delicious angst! however, that doesn't mean I don't want my happy ending! Don't make me beg...you'll get a real review on your next chapter..after I have caught up...and am not typing on my phone.
smallfish 2008-06-22 ch 12, anon.	abuseoh a very nice chapter the yuffie story is starting to get interesting just for the love of god don't kill her off she is one of the best characters and one you portray very well also the argument between tifa and aeris is good because every relationship has it's bad spots but that said lets have them settle it quickly
licketysplat 2008-06-12 ch 12, anon.	abuseOmg. An update. A very good update as well. This sudden development with Yuffie has me worried though. Well, good suspense is always welcomed though. XD Things are truly getting even more interesting than before and I do hope that there would be another update soon. No pressure though. I know how it is to have life get in the way of things. Take your time for it because I'd want to read another exciting chapter from you. :)
Ekilow lettyion 2008-05-14 ch 11,	abuseI am in love with your story!! You must update! Please, please update soon! :)
Djevel 2008-05-10 ch 11,	abusePlease, please tell me you haven't deserted this fic! D: I want to see more...I NEED to see more! Please update! Your fic is amazing, there's no other that can even begin to compare to it.
Lurker_Soul 2008-04-14 ch 11, anon.	abuseContinue! Awsome fic (although I'm not so smart and got confused at some parts) ^-^. So... Update when you can!
no1swiser 2008-04-12 ch 11, anon.	abuseSo when are you going to update? I really like this story
smallfish 2007-09-26 ch 10, anon.	abusehey I was just wondering how long we got to wait for the next chapter
Hashkorns 2007-08-13 ch 10,	abuseUpdate! I like the history that you made for the Cetra and Jenova. Real interesting stuff. And the part where Yuffie might be part Cetra? Did I say real interesting stuff?
lifestream aerith 2007-08-07 ch 10,	abusecol waiting teh next chap
Shadow 2007-06-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseI was beginning to worry that you had forgotten about this excellent story, thankfully though it seems its still on and all I can say is... THANK YOU. Another beautiful chapter, if not a wee bit confusing, but thats probably due to the fact I haven't read this in a while...I'll re-read stuff. Looking forward for future chaps!!

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