Beautiful story and wonderfully developed plot!
You captured Renji's side of the story so perfectly and the way he felt when Ichigo and Rukia got married!
thanks for writing!

Really wonderful story

Aww... Poor Renji. D:
His love in unrequited.

I think I'm gonna cry...seriously. It's just so...I dunno. It makes you feel so sorry for Renji, and the sad thing is that he probably really DOES love Rukia, and seeing as IchiRukia seems to be the liklier of the two, I can totally see something like this becoming canon.
Poor Renji...unrequited love it the worst, isn't it?
--Kyoshi

Wow. It's so sad, poor Renji! And so descriptive, it flows nicely.

It almost made me sad...anxiousness over the paper in Latin tomorrow won though.

Great fic!

I'm think i'm gonna cry... seriously. That's why i'm absolutely AGAINST IchiRuki. I don't want that! T_T
I'd be Renji, i'd have done some crazy stuff...
Very well written, by the way. ^^

Appropriately bittersweet. Lovely piece.

OMG *goes to get tissue* That was so sad. I never thought of Renji being so jealous, but you did a great job. This was so sad, and i am a die hard ichiruki fan, and i feel so bad for Renji. Great job!

angsty, i like it. you know what's sad? it happens in real life too. oh well...added to my favs

angsty, but classy, I really liked it

Wow...if Renji viewed Rukia in a romantic way, this would be exactly how he would feel as the third party. Amazing one-shot! I particularly loved Renji's last line and the thoughts going through his head when he stairs at the window.

So sad.

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Bitter ending. -sigh-

I loved it though.

you mix the sweet and the sad like chocolate and peanut butter... m...

I love this fanfic, I think you really captured Renji's essence. I'm a Ichigo/Rukia fan, so I liked the ending, even if it's a tough break for Renji.
And 11th Division dancing to disco?? I don't think I'll be able to get that one out of my head for a while. :D
Will you be writing more Bleach fanfics?