great story. I'm going to read your other ones now.

Fantastic thank you so much.

Superman Killed By Toy-man? YOu protryed their Pain SO well

I just finished re-watching "Hereafter" - one of my favorites, and I found myself looking for more to tell me how Bruce and Diana were feeling during this time, especially Bruce. Your story was just what I needed - very well-written and good insight into the characters (all, not just BM & WW). Thank you so much! :)

This is such a wonderful story! Continue writing stories this great!

gr8 story 2!

Another great chapter, in my opinion. I feel so sorry for poor Bruce, 'losing' the best friend he's ever had like that.

This seems like it could be a really awesome story. :)

awesome! yes I think you should add a chapter of just those two :D keep writing, I love the stories!

loved the fight seen with lobo! jeez he's a jerk... good job! :D

I love how you tie in your story with the actual episode. keep writing! :D

haha well I hope its not the last time you write a scene like this!

This chapter is quite well-written and very sexy. I'm glad you didn't go into awful bad sex cliches like you very well could have. Still, a little too explicit for a story dealing with Superman's death. But I can't deny that it did make me slightly horny.

I consider the Batman/Wonder Woman pairing to be my favourite, and the way you've written from their perspectives is very interesting. It may not be absolutely true to character, but still well done. Sexy withough being sleazy.

Okay, I'll review. For a first time love scene it's quite nice! For Batman's POV though, I'd have suggested to streamline some discription and include some sensual details, like the feel and smell of her hair, the feel of her hands on him, and a bit of his internal This-is-really-happening-oh-damn can't turn back. Since that is a running theme with him. However, be that as it may, it is very loving and rich, just what they both deserve.