Reviews for It Started With a Game

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silenced22 2007-10-08 ch 10,	abuseThis story rocked my world. I love the baseball theme (I am a born and raised die hard Cubs fan). I also loved the name of every chapter. Great job! I am now off to read the sequel.
truglasgowgal 2007-09-09 ch 10,	abuseWow! I absolutely loved this! I found it on LJ, as one of the nominations for CSI fanfic awards, an figured I'd check it out. Right from the get-go, I loved Tess, she's a great character, and the banter between her an Flack was great. I loved how you wrote the conversations, all of them, they all flowed so well. And I admire your ability to keep Danny and Flack 'in' character, such a great talent you have there. Not to mention the fact I figure you just about portrayed every flack fan's thoughts through Tess's - def. the eyes! :D Wonderfully written. I agree with some of the aothers, I thought the ending was a little abrupt, but I liked it too, it was sorta 'fitting' with their relationship and who you've made them out to be. Keep up the excellent work, and good luck for the awards :D Steph x
Ellen 2007-01-11 ch 4, anon.	abuseHey, I usually don't like fics with an X/OC Pairing, but still I start reading one sometimes. i don't finish the most of them though, just because they're hopelessly "Mary-sueish". But I gotta tell you, when I read her name I thought that sounden familiar and when you mentioned her being Hungarian - you had won :)
Soccer-Bitch 2007-01-04 ch 10,	abuseawesome story. i enjoyed reading it. ^_^
Lily Michelle 2006-11-15 ch 10,	abuseWhat? That's the strangest ending ever. Not that I don't like the fic, but that's a rather abrupt ending. Who sent the flowers? Are you going to write more or a sequel of some sort? I want to know about the flowers!
The Little Corinthian 2006-11-14 ch 10,	abuseYes, game on :0P Odd about the flowers, but I'm interested to see how you spin that. Very nice, looking forward to more!
Rainbow Stevie 2006-11-14 ch 10,	abuseYes! Nine chapters with the clever titles and the extended baseball theme! Huh, you'd almost think I liked the game. Nah, I just like little details like that woven into the framework. Liked the quips about Peter, the rainbow bouquet of flowers, the intrigue of the pearl vase, and Flack's understandable wariness at seeing Bette again. :D Oh, and the bit about looking into his eyes, "You who think ya see everythin’ in there." I like that image. Everything's closer to the surface with Don; he's a less complex character than Horatio...at least, that's how I see it. The story has a whole was a great pleasure to read, introduced some fantastic characters, and ultimately achieved what I warned you would happen - I'm paying as much attention to Don's storylines in episodes now as I am to Mac's. head shake Well. I have great faith in your ability to write a sequel. Feeling a lot of foreboding surrounding the mystery note. Beyond that, haven't a clue. Also, as of today, your stories are officially crowding out everything else in my story binder...so congratulations, you're the third fanfic writer to get her own binder on my shelf. :)
demolished-soul 2006-11-14 ch 10,	abuseSo, it's finished? Like the whole story? Or just the chapter? 'Cause it's kinda odd just ending it there. Like, who sent the flowers? That guy she was dating. But if it isn't finished, I'm happy 'cause I can still read more of your story. Those two really make a good couple. =)
meadow567 2006-11-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseQuestion? Is the story finished? I hope not.
iluvroadrunner 2006-11-14 ch 10,	abuseo...i am intrigued. who sent the flowers? are we going to get more background on "alex"? what did he do? am i going to want to kick him? so many questions. plus don and tess are too cute. i really am liking this so far. can't wait to see where it goes.
Rainbow Stevie 2006-11-11 ch 9,	abuseThey need to get "back to neutral ground," right. :D I pretty much laughed my way through this chapter. Ah, so much cute teasing. Danny still stole all the best lines, though. Between his Tiger Girl nickname for Tess and the comment about making "kissey faces"...ah, I enjoyed it. As always.
The Little Corinthian 2006-11-11 ch 9,	abuseHeh. I love it. Very nice, looking forward to more!
iluvroadrunner 2006-11-11 ch 9,	abusei LOVED this. the banter was terrific. it flowed so well and it wasn't awkward or weird at anyone point and it was just -great-. i'm so jealous right now.
demolished-soul 2006-11-11 ch 9,	abuseThose two are a good match for each other. I can't wait to read what else you have planned for the both of them. =) Keep up the good work.
meadow567 2006-11-11 ch 9, anon.	abuseI'm still here. I loved the last couple of chapters and this one was really great. Loved the teasing.

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