Nice story. I can tell that this is one of your first. While you did a good job with this one, your writing contined to improve with the susequent ones.

I will have to take a look at the sequel.

Interesting twist there. I'm not sure I understand the logistics of Charlie taking that much time off but it probably works the best for your story.

I started picking up a few older stories and this one came up. I have read others of yours but I don't remember this one (I may have read it a long time ago and just can't remember). This is an interesting twist, to have them meet while she was a little younger. I'm looking forward to reading more.

I love all of your stories especially this one!

ha-ha i m loving this lol i have a big fluffy kitten too all though he's not so big either his name is Salvatore and he is all black with the cutest splotch of white in the middle of his chest lol

i really liked that chapter, thanks x

As soon as I found out Bella was fourteen I was thinking, "I wanna read a story where Bella is in her younger teens and Edward is still a vampire...
And walla, when the Cullens came, I read golden eyes and I was like, "WHAT?
They are vampires, are they not? Whats with Jasper being 'sick' then? Hmmm? Not 'cause he can't be around to many humans and the blood is overpowering and he'll want to suck everyone dry? So what is it then? The flu?

so far soooooooooooo cute i just hope theres no bxj i hate jacob

I absolutely love this story!

iloved this story! 3

Argh! I just lost the game. That was pure evil, and I don't think you're even playing. At any rate, the age change is interesting.

Great chapter

Great chapter

That had to be the best story of little bella growing up in love with edward, that i have EVER read. I read this story from beginning to end. Ur an amazing author!

abso-freaking-lutely fantastic!