short but cute all the same.

Ha, that was really short but it was sweet. :]

Hee hee. That one was funny. Sorry, I just couldn't help but smile. It was short, that's the way I like my chapters/fanfics. Why don't you do a big fanfic just about James and Lily's school days, you seem to be quite good at writing those kinds. I've never really taken into consideration what happened when they were kids. I'm usually stuck in what happened when my OC was a kid. (very od childhood and I make Bill Weasley seem like your James Potter) I really like these, you're a wonderful author! I love you (not like that)!

lol, i am suddenly reading your stories again. my email story alert thing was being retarded, so i never got any of your chapters for the prank wars!!

i love short, sweet and to-the-point oneshots like this. it got quiet a few reviews for a oneshot, too. nice work. more?

Though it was corny, it was cute. James and Lily are fun to read/write about because we know so little about them.

Good plot, but it needs a bit more details and some more length. I liked it though; great idea!

x Caramel

It may be short and corny but I liked it.
Cheers!

hay it mde me laugh!

short but really cute!
tigerlilystar

Aw that's cute.

That was so cute! I loved it.. a little short, but very very good!

awesome! what movie?

im reviewing just b/c it seems to ** off you writers when people dont, and, why not, so here goes...
short and corny, but cute, try adding more substance to yout next story, (i know you probably already knew that, but heck, what do you expect, im not the writer here.)
looking forward to your next story!!

:( Reviewing my own story. Teehee!


I got the idea from the movie LIAR LIAR. :)

aw! cute, not corny. is it wishful thinking to want more around this story?