 Phoenix of Golden Fire 2006-10-20 . chapter 1Terricka, did you get this out of your mom's poetry notebook? I know you all too well you did. Stupid.
-Bff, Darcy.
P.S. If your mom wrote it tell her it's wonderful, if you wrote it, I'll have to punch you at school on Monday.
P.P.S. I hate the story Angel Bird, and this is NOT a flame. |
 bijoukaiba 2006-10-19 . chapter 1Aww, how cute! Although I never intended to, Fox x Zelda sort of sprung up in my own fanfiction "Swordplay".
The only thing I noticed was one or two capitalization errors. Other than that it was perfect!
PS: You might want to turn on anonymous reviews- you'll get a lot more feedback that way.
*favs story* |