Great new chapter. I LOVE IT Keep going with it?

Ooh, so we get to meet the evil crazy lady at last. I get the feeling that this chapter was kinda rushed- a few grammar mistakes here and there, however I really liked the ending line. :D

Great new chapter. I LOVE it. Keep going with it. Great job.

Great chapters wow. I LOVE them all. So Please keep going? You are a very great writer.

blood of an enemy, eh? that sounds a bit familiar. :)

so glad i gave this story a chance. u've improved so much shince the first chappie. now i can't wait for more!

As always, looking forward to more

yay! He trusts her. Someone trust worthy i hope? It was a great chapter, a bit short but still good. Update soon

Very touching. :D

Great chapter! But i mut say this:, (unfortuntay you must get tired of this), Hate those mean people who said those mean stuff. Hope you update soon!

The plot and concept are definitely there. You just really need to proofread better. I’d take another look at this chapter, fix your mistakes, and upload it again.

On the other hand, you really are doing a good job with the timing of your exposition. We are learning about October’s past at just the right time.

Can’t wait for the next chapter, but don’t rush it. Take your time and make sure that there are no careless mistakes.

Damn Dillion! Great Chap! and I'm now even more convinced.

“How does that make you feel?” LOL! Couldn't pass up adding that in, right?

Fuc* Dillion. I hope you kill him off a long and painful death. I bet he killed the Grandpa.

Betreyed by her closest friend? Poor October! I like the direction this story is going in.