Awesome! I loved the iambic pentameter (sp?)and the poem was really interesting.

Nice poem. I favour Angeline too. I think it's Angeline who has feelings which relate to the poem. Minerva doesn't exactly have many emotional issues...XD btw, which Rachmaninov prelude? Sorry, just curious.

Evalia

cool! except if she's dead, definitely minerva. muahaha! *grin* sorry...i have a dead!minerva obsession right now.

BANZAI!
~hollybridgetpeppermint

Oh wow. This was awesome! You should read your stuff from another person's view, they're fantastic! The seriousness and the lyrical way you write things and how you blend it all with the medaphors and similies and everything else... [dies in reading heaven]

Keep it up!

~ Koki

"The spiders... they want me to tap-dance!"

Sorry about that... *is a goof*

I'm an ignorant about poetry, honestly, but I do love a rhymed and rhytmic stanza every now and then. Your work is very delicate and expressive, I especially loved the sentence construction (to make it rhyme, I know).

*thumbs up*

That was wonderful...if not sad...(unless it's Minerva ;) )

Great work!

/:/Brizo/:/