Actualy, Darks death was just an extra so that means that you can make a sequel to the good ending. Don't keep your fans waiting!

Doesn't everyone hate Navi? What would you chose: A cave with bones on the ground and a sign saying "Warning,Dragon" or a lovely springtime meadow with a sign saying "Hey! Listen!"?

okay so first of I would like to say
OH MY GOD!
I have never met anyone before who sopported Dark Link and Malon I was litaraly hyprovenalateing as I read I loved how you made Dark so well he was almost as I imagined him AH I am still so pumped from reading it it was so good I loved it
it make me want to type mine up and put it on here

Good Job

:highfive:

I am still so excited that someone shares my passion for Dark Link and Malon

Okay I'm reviewing but in exchange you should go review my story. It's called A Shadow's Fire. it's Dark link X Malon, but... it is definitely not as cool as yours. Keep writing!

Actually, I really hated that alternate ending

aww, that's so cute!
awesome ending

Just as good as the other ending, but I still like the other one better. I blame my fun-lovingness.

*Slowly starts clapping*
Bravo, good ending. Perhaps it's just because I've grown attached to the characters, but I liked it, despite it having a few spelling/grammer errors.

That's really good! I love it!

normally i read everything about dark link, but i dont have time at the moment, ill read the rest later, ive read the first bit, a bit of the middle & the end but as far as i can tell it's pretty damned good...well chop chop, plenty more fan fics 2 rate ta ta!

So it's over now...*cries* seriously, that was good, and sweet, and... yeah.And my e-mail adress should be below my name, unless you want to maybe put alink or something on your page so others can see? and I don't suppose we'll be getting a sequel? oh well. was beautiful while it lasted!

Wonderful. Simply, wonderful.

that was the greatest version of their fight i have ever seen

*Dark turns into a real man and consequently bleeds to death* No, no, no, Malon! You don't pull out sharp pointy things stabbed into people! lol XD

hmm... catch phrase... I can see Dark calling Malon "Sunshine" (light and shadows and all that symbolic-goodness -__-; i feel so cliche) but that's not really a catch phrase... ah nvm i suck at these types of things

can't wait to see the end!

*worries anyway*

Poor Dark. The guy just can't seem to catch a break.

I did find it pretty funny when Dark ran past Zelda and kissed Malon, and Zelda thought it was Link. Classic.

Think up a catchphrase? Well damn, now all I can think about are corny sitcom catchphrases.

Erm... let's see... what would be a good catchphrase?

"Are you threatening me?"

or

"And who's gonna make me?"

Eh... I'll probably think of something better by the time it's too late. That ALWAYS happens to me!