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| shaybay55 2008-05-01 ch 1,  | abuseis i lindseys |
| squintsquad03 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI read it from Danny's perspective first, but now that i read it again I kind-of like Lindsay's perspective more. I just looked at the title again and it makes much more sense. :P Which perspective did you write from? |
| Camilla- too lazy to sign i... 2007-11-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseok, i read it from danny's pov first, then tried from lindsay's- i still think it sounds more like danny. cleverly done tho! |
| nikki.02 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusebrilliant. i read it from Lindsay's POV, but that's just me. It's really good either way ;D |
| kokiri fairy 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant work! i loved reading this |
| Phyxsius 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was absolutely brilliant! I was trying to figure out which perspective you were writing from, and finally just let it go when I didn't see any tell-tale signs. I settled on reading from Lindsay's POV, 'cause you know...I wouldn't have minded being in her spot. *blushes* Great piece! |
| Mariekjj 2007-06-05 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this fic :D I read it from Lindsay's POV, and read it again from Danny's POV after I read your note. "I pull away to look at your face. God, I find so much comfort in your eyes, the one person on this earth who understands me. We’re so different, you and I – and yet, here with you, surrounded by you, connected to you… it’s so… natural. It feels like we’ve been doing this for years." Awesome. Loved it! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWhen I first read this I read from Lindsay's perspective... Loved this... JENNIFER |
| goldenEdelux07 2007-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG! the whole time i was reading this i was like 'who's pov is this from?!?!' then at the end i was like o. |
| dlforever2345 2007-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abusei think its from danny point of view!! |
| probysgirl 2007-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI read it from Danny's POV but certain bits i was also reading it from Lindseys too! Cool stuff! Katy :-) |
| DAnNSfreak 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseCool! I like the way you wrote this, how it can be read from both ways... I automatically fixed on Lindsay's POV, by the way... :-b |
| Pilgrim Soul 2006-11-17 ch 1, | abuseI've only just started getting into CSI:NY and have read very little FF for this show, I've just been skimming through some stories tonight and come upon this one. I'm impressed, it works perfectly from both POV's and that's very clever writing. |
| melanie g 2006-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't know for sure who's point of view this is. It seems to me that it goes back and forth between both of them. I really like the story anyway. Please keep writing such good stories. |
| A 2006-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI initally read it as a Danny POV, but it also does totally work as a Lindsay POV too. It's a great story though, regardless of whichever POV you pick. :) |