Song,
I'm seriously in tears, writing this to you. This story is utterly amazing. I'm trying to find the words to describe how amazing this story is, but there are no words that can describe just how truly fantastic this.
Definately favoriting this!

Long live Beast Boy and Raven :)

Very interesting. Liked it though.

OMFG! What is up with that um. Well it starts with a p and ends with pudding. But this was excellent!

Woah that must have been one hell of a nightmare,
I feel sorry for him, but it was a good fic,
nice job.

Lets see, so OOc it´s pathetic and as unique and just as original as Hammerfall, meaning not at all. But Hammerfall are gods and responsible for the two best music albums in history.

And, this is something I´m honestly confused about, what gives people the idea that her emotions talk to her? They disappeared the moment she got close to them in "Nevermore". And the script format can´t be mixed with ordinary writing without being ** up.

Take it down, get a beta, get a new plot, watch the show more closley and come again. And, just in case you blew a gasket from reading this, this is only a borderline flame.

listen to me 1 it was a great story 2 keep it up 3 i was moved 4 i whant to tell you it was a bad clif hanger.

Dude... that was pretty ** up! I honestly thought that dream sequence was a flashback, nice job! I like how everything is written here, so damn emotional, love it! Excuse my over use of exclemation points, I'm on a bit of a sugar rush right now. Anyway, great story, keep the authors' spirit!

cute...but it wasnt scary... i dunno
csg