luv it! keep writing!

OH no, I've reached the end of this fic... I just hope there's more to come... I love it.

HFGFL

I think its amazing!! PLzz update soon, i will be adding this story to my favorite!!

Hi, I just found this story today, and it's really good, please update soon!

An interesting and exciting chapter. Update soon.

hey your ff is great!! i love it, and it surprise me that albus is a phoenix, that was awesome. please keep it up.
until next chapter.

Your story is chalked full of great ideas. Even though it is not very well put togeather, you are keeping enough of a plot that is keeping the reader involved.

It looks like you are candy coating many of the wishlists and threads created by JKR and other HP fanfiction writers. May I suggest that you expand your characters while you continue to do that. The bouncing around touching on this and that topic doesn't work for stories in general, but for us HP fanfiction readers, it is enjoyable to soak in your many ideas.

good chapter. still need to work on your spelling. Hermione's in trouble isn't she? update soon.

It's been an interesting story so far. You need to check your spelling a little more carefully. The return to Hogwarts should be most interesting. Update soon.

Although you have some original plot lines you have stolen some of them from other people. Either acknowledge the other authors or be original. Your original bits are quite good.

i like it..
UPDATE SOON

I can tell this is going to be a good story.

Woho! First post!

Okay, you story is very good for a first shot. It moved a little too fast but that's not really a bad thing. I would have loved more Harry and Ginny mushyness but that's just me. Keep up the good work and please post the next chapter soon. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.