So freaking sweet! Seriously, words can't describe how much I enjoyed this chapter. You almost had me in tears and it was sweet and satisfying and I love that Wally's back!

This might be a favorite chapter so far. :) Great job!

Hey LG, extremely sorry for taking so long to review this. Anyways, on with the review:

Excellent start - I get the feeling the first Chapter is happening in the present and the subsequent chapters were meant reveal how that firs chapter came about. The second chapter was awesome - it was short but it was also the best chapter in my opinion.

“Man’s World is all about power and control, over everything. Some people plan every second of their lives. Rain is just a reminder that the Gods are there and they control everything. Men can predict, and hide from, and recreate rain, but they can’t control it no matter how hard they try.” - Chapter six - heh! Lemme guess, this is you channelling your inner philosopher through the characters in your story. I think this quote was awesome.

The last chapter was pretty cool as well. Infinite Crisis happened a little differently in this universe I see. Bart is probably gone and Wally is on Earth with kids who were babies the last time I checked.

Anyways, just wanted to drop in and let you know that this was an excellent story and I’m sorry I didn’t have the time to read it before. Take care, keep up the good work and keep these great stories coming our way.

That was so cute, so adorable, and so realistic. How you do it I'll never know, but I'm glad I know an authentic writer. Great job.

I understand writer's block, believe me, but I think this was great. It was sweet and touching, a great look back at the two of them being kids and enjoying each other without the rest of the Titans. The end was bittersweet, but I really enjoyed it! Another great addition to this piece and I'm sorry it took me so long to read it!

Nice chapter.

Loving it! Very well written.

CONVERTED!

Beautiful writing. At the end, it took all my power to bite my lip in happiness. Why haven't I read this sooner? Oh, and this chappie, ALMOST has me converted to Dickie/Donna.

LG! Where have you been, girl? Glad to have you back!

LOL! That's cute!

Oh... rain. I also love rain... and standing in the rain, for that matter... It feels... grand and poetic.

This is a lovely piece, LG. So touchy with your last paragraphs about Donna's death, and how rain can bring Dick closer to her...

I also love the fact that you inserted Donna's ballet slippers here. I love them as well!

I don't know how you do it, you sure have some talent there. The way you write is artistic. Take note people! We could all learn from this aspiring writer. Okay, so this person is a Dick/Donna fan, I'm a Dick/Kory fan but I love her work. It's not often you come across a gifted writer.

And at least open your minds a bit before you start flaming, but then nobody's forcing you to read it.

Great chap, very sweet but also sad, please update soon.

thats some writers block - judging by your word count you were going at 1-2 words per minute.

Well , be proud that you muscled through it and got something finished

Waah...this one's deep.

Me likes muchly.

I've always loved standing in the rain meself. It both clods and refreshes, dirties as much as it washes away, and both warms and cools. Barefoot is best, I think. Being able to raise your head to face it takes a courage I've yet to muster.

It's good.

LOL I LOVE THIS SONG! You did a great job! And i'm so glad that Donna comes back! He looks so miserable! I LOVE this chapter it was really good! Hope the writer's block goes away soon! Love ya!

A bit sad and very sweet. Just adorable actually! I had no idea that it didn't rain on Themyscira. Interesting...

Great job! I really do love this pairing. :)