hi that was very nice season but where is the rest of it i can't wait to read the season final i liked it so much plz tell me when you are gonna update it thanks

nice story can't wait to read more!

I loved this story! You do a great job!! I can't wait to read more to the story.

very good job

WOW!! i never thought Chris was this powerful. Like i new Wyatt is powerful but i never thought Chris was more powerful

Excellent episode! I am enjoying the power boosts the Charmed Ones have recieved. I am looking foward to the next episode.

I love it! I can't wait to read more! Keep me posted on new updates.

cute

Very good job. I have read all 16 episodes and loved them all. I am looking foward to the season finale because it will Charmed's the 200th episode. Once again good job.

very good job

THis rocks.. i just read all 15 'episodes' and i love it. I've seen a couple attempts at a season 9 but this is by far teh best. I loved teh one with PIper/Chris and Leo/Wyatt and teh food fight.. classic heheh Keep em coming

I love it, absolutely love it! I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work, it is really awesome!

You are doing a really great job. I especially like how you are making Billie more of a minor character, than the star of the show. I also like how you are remembering to include Wyatt and Chris. I always believed that Piper and Leo would be good parents to both of their children, and I am glad that you are including that. These really do seem like they could have been in the actual series. Keep up the good work.

I absolutely love it. I can't wait for more.

very good. I like how you had Paige & Henry find out, the allepmted vanquish in the clouds was pretty cool.