 jessie 2009-09-11 . chapter 12 hey i love the way u write! Its gt me hooked. I would hav reviewed after each chapter bt i was too hooked to stop and say thankyou! Hw selfish of me :( i love the way your bring ishida & orihime together, its coming along so natural. Its awesome and the way you describe the relationship between ishida and his dad is absolutely great! Im hooked on every sentence, im sorry to say that i skim through your ichigo & rukia but youve made me a total lover of only ishida & orihime. Im really excited to see wat else youve written (hopefully u got someone fr my beautiful renji lol) thanks again! Xo |
 Summerlover01 2009-04-26 . chapter 1Oh wow! I'm so happy to have found this story. The writing was superb. I loved the details and descriptions that were littered throughout. Also, you did an awesome job with keeping everyone in character. I absolutely love your writing style. Anyway, this is a very interesting story you've got here. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. |
 LiviaK14 2009-01-29 . chapter 5Aww, looks like you abandoned it, huh? I'm not judging, though - It's a shame, but I know how crazy things can get, and I've abandoned my fair share of projects as well :P
Well, for what it's worth, I thought your characterization was near-perfect - which is pretty much the best compliment a fic can get, I think!
The way you built up the Ichigo/Rukia relationship was what impressed me the most, even if Ishihime was the focus of the story and very well-done at that. I think it's because most writers tend to make the paring too mushy, having Ichigo say things like "please don't go" and "stay with me", while I just don't see them that way at all. When your Ichigo stepped aside and said "If you need to, you can go" I had the urge to open a bottle of Champaign and celebrate - because that's exactly what I was looking for. 'Do what you want, I trust you' is the kind of attitude that fits ichiruki best, in my view.
Ishida was my second favorite thing. His cautious confidence and cool-headedness when facing an enemy and his insecurity and over-caution when it comes to dear Inoue-san were all very nicely put.
I'd say, though, that maybe Rukia could've been a bit less supportive of Ichigo's every decision and criticized him a bit. I could easily see Ichigo deciding he would burst into Hueco Mundo and stop Aizen all by himself, but I think Rukia, level-headed as always, would at the very least call him an idiot a couple of times and insist that he wait for Soul-Society's orders, even if in the end you had her give up and decide she would go with him.
Other than that, though, I can't think of anything that bothered me. Even Isshin seemed ridiculously in-character - telling Ichigo to "Go get 'em" and then acting as though he hadn't said anything at all was very Kubo-ish of you indeed XD
Going on my Bleach faves of all times, I loved it, incomplete as it is.
P.S: If you gave up on the manga on account of HM arc's mindless hack'n'slashing (which I can totally understand!), you might wanna give it another chance now - because things are really shaping up. Maybe it'll even inspire you to continue the fic, who knows ^_^ |