Aww. That was really well done. Lovely. You switched between the two timeframes well and the ending was painful, and beautiful.

Well done.

ohmygosh!

that just broke my heart.

That was very good, sad, but very good.

holy crap. WOW. This is so sad.. aw, Kitty :( the ending was perfect.. wow, just... wow.. awesome work!

Wow


that was sad



well written

very sad

you do realise i am sat heree in tears dont u. that was si sad so amazing.