Well I started reading your other fanfic (That's Why) and I've reached chapter twenty-three. Since you suggested I come here to read more about Nevaeh, here I am. I loved this oneshot almost as much as I love what I've read of That's Why. You are such an amazing writer. You capture all of the KH characters perfecty and your original character's are just as rich as the ones Square has created. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! You're amazing. I can't wait to finish That's Why. (I promise when I'm done with it I'll leave you a fat long review.) Well, I'm sure I'm leaving some things out but overall I love your writing and I hope that you continue.
~Kyia713
P.S. I'm so happy you've dedicated your life to God! It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside to hear you dedicate every chapter to him!

That story rocked! I'm gonna read That's Why now(or part of it since it's almost 2 in the moring).

Very good. Sorry I didn't read earlier, but this explains how Tarsus found her much like how Xemnas found Roxas. Both halves are now hooked up in my mind. May the Grace of the Valar protect You.

Yay! I've finally read this background fic!
Yes, it was sad, and a little vague when it came to Nevaeh's transition to the darkness, but it was still good. I like how you tied it into one of the last chapters of THAT'S WHY.
Speaking of which, I'm still waiting anxiously for the next chapter...don't mean to nag...

Great job!

-C.A.

wow, just wow oh and,,KEEP IT UP!!

Aww! So sad! And the Riku-Nevaeh fluffy moment at the end was so huggable...

I LOVE THIS!

That's so sweet! And sad! And wow!

yipe! so cute!

but i feel so bad for Nevaeh. but im curious: how did her keyblade turn from the Kingdom Key to a snake-like key thingy?

Wow. It was interesting to read Nevaeh's story. I wonder if Riku will find out? Ah well. Thanx for posting it!

LOVed it!! ><
i knew heaven had a hard past or history...:P
now i can read chappie 23?..of thats why><
this is real good ..keep it up!!

OMG, this is awesome! I adore Nevaeh so this fic was going to be awesome no matter what but your spectacular writing made it the perfect example of perfection! This is so great! Keep up the good work!

P.S: The next chappie of "That's Why" sounds sweet! I can't wait!

I think I need to cry (sniff). Great side story, keep it up!

Aw... yes, it WAS sad, but well-written nevertheless. ^^

Oh... shiny keyblades... O.O

Okay. That's it. I'm officially 90% RikuXNevaeh. Why only 90%? My cousin Sam [aka LilyflowerJamesprongs] already claimed him. xD I have Gaara-kun. OMG, have you ever heard about poor lil' Gaara-kun's past? Don't. It's depressing... -sobs-

Anyway, thanx for ze update!1onethirtytwoseventyfour4637261!
^^ Keep it up!

-- Mrs. Sabaku no Gaara.

Aw, poor Heaven! *hugs gingerly, then dances out of range*

excellant as always :)

--Aiko

GOD, I LOVE NEVAEH! She's the ONLY OC that I HAVE EVER loved this much! Well, Heaven's got some kind of background. She's pretty awesome. Kudos (sorry stole your word!:])to you for creating her!
Peace out,
x.guitarpunk.x