   Erubescent.Flames 2008-10-09 . chapter 4Wow.
This story is amazing!
I hope you update soon.
:3 |
| jesse 2008-04-24 . chapter 4 awsome is sll i can say |
 slpytlak 2007-04-14 . chapter 4Wow, this is great. If someone messes with Jack, they'll mess with her. Do more. |
 Shadir 2007-01-16 . chapter 4Wow, very funny |
| Syrenia 2006-12-07 . chapter 4 Tala just gets cooler and cooler. Godspeed to your updates! |
 PoisonousAngel 2006-12-04 . chapter 4This story is like so totally awesome. You have everyone in great character. Update soon, chikkie! |
| Jack's Obsessed Fangirl 2006-12-04 . chapter 4 AH! SOO GOOD! UPDATE OR YOU'LL NEVER HEAR FROM YOUR PARENTS AGAIN! |
| Syrenia 2006-12-03 . chapter 3 I really like it so far. Tala seems fun. :D
I'll be reading! |
| Jack's Obsessed Fangirl 2006-12-03 . chapter 3 That is the most normal a fic I've read in weeks. I love it! |
| PoisonousAngel 2006-12-03 . chapter 3 This was great! I love JackOC's. That is what this is, isn't it? There isn't many of them out there. Please update soon. Love Tala by the way. |
| Jack's Obsessed Fangirl 2006-12-02 . chapter 2 Intense at that last part... I liked it. UPDATE! Or I'll steal your soul... B3 |
 PhantomoftheBasket 2006-11-18 . chapter 2Aw... poor Jack. That's mean. Oh well. What happens, happens. You're the author, so you get to choose what happens.
You should definatly((sp?)) keep this up!
Phantomofthebasket |
 bakechan 2006-10-20 . chapter 2incredible chapter! poor jack! but this actually sounds like the real jack! |
 firesandstorm 2006-10-20 . chapter 1PLESE! CONT! |
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